While in a meadow, Fluttershy discovers a strange creature who doesn't seem to be the cute and cuddly critter she believed.
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I liked it, rather sweet.
Ya know, that felt like an actual episode. Good job.
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That's what I'm striving for with the stories that I write. Thanks!
Did you create the Lokirus? If so, Could I use it for the 'Rayverse' (my personal universe of stuff)? I would love it if Drayden (One of my characters) Could have a pet Lokirus named Bedlam to torture people with.
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I did and by all means, be my guest.
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Thanks! I love creature creating! Maybe we could start a group called the creature creation guild? Create bios of creatures, use the official equesria map to plot down where their habitats are, etc.
Very episode worthy! I liked it!
At first I was like
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You really did make it sound like it was from an actual episode, good job.
2299191 Mistake in the FIRST SENTENCE!!
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I just don't know what went wrong...
2356242 Could you fix it?
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What's the mistake? Having trouble putting my finger on it.
2356262 The word 'people'
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HUUURRRR DUURRRR
I'm dumb. Thanks for the catch!
2356363 Now I can finally read the second sentence!
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I can't help but feel like you're having a bit of a laugh here.
2356776 I just hate it when authors make mistakes! Also: upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/9/9d/Austin_Powers_in_Goldmember.jpg
Very good! I can see this in my head as a real episode!
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Your Lokirus reminds me heavily of the classic Imp. In my book, that makes it 20% cooler.
I might have to borrow the name sometime, if you're alright with that.
2300012 I have to agree on the episode worthy comment too. This should be made into an episode.