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Laarsgaard
Average Brony I guess, I've been writing for a long time and decided to try my hand ad fanfiction so here I am.
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Pinkie and Khorne...
I don't know whether to click on the chapter link or start running for the mountains...
MOAR
this has such promise to be a series like giving a slaneeshi faggot rarity
a Tzeench nerd twilight
and a nurgle neckbeard fluttershy
also is is hillarious and well written
2356066
Yes! we need more ponies for all chaos servants!
Silly Pinkie Pie, why u eat those skulls.
Skulls to Khorne ya silly filly
WANT.... WANT MOAR
oh my sweet Inquisitor God, I WANT MOAR
*reads description
*reads comments
*about to click then remembers it's April 1st
10/10 best Space Marines crossover I've ever read. Amazing job. I expect more from you as I will immediately follow you.
So you actually wrote it... And it's damn good.
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An amusing little fic. One note I have for easier reading: Vary your word choice a bit more. The most egregious example was "his implant burning into his mind and his system overloading with combat drugs." I don't need to be reminded of that every other paragraph, and if it's really happening that often, it's losing it's impact.
Another smaller example was: "The hand was massive and scaled. The hand was the color of blood with talons that were the color of the void itself. The hand held itself upright to reveal the palm to Tyranus." Not sure if this was an artist choice, but it felt like a lot of repetition at once. My rule of thumb is to use a different word or phrase to start every sentence in a paragraph. Unless you're doing it for a reason, which might be the case here, but I wasn't sure.
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And I hope you enjoyed the story.
I generally try to vary word choice more as a rule of thumb as well and if you've read Deliverance Lost in the HH series the word 'Legionnaire' was repeated so often I wanted to gouge out my eyes and I almost didn't finish the story even though it was awesome because of it. Thank you for pointing that out though!
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Do one on this!
WHERED THE F*CK IS KALDOR WHEN YOU NEED HIM
2362666
I have never seen that before. I found it hilarious.
This was amazing for a oneshot
Possible expansion on story maybe?
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Considering the feedback that I'm getting it's become a possibility. That and I love writing a man eating Pinkie with steel teeth.
More! This is awesome! Pinkie nom!
And Failbaddon the Armless may make a appearance soon, it appears. Now all we need is CREEEEEEEED. Or Boreale.
In no means do I know what compelled you to do this.
All I have to say is that this is THE most HILARIOUS thing I've ever read.
I can only imagine Pinkie running around a huge warrior of Chaos, killing everything in sight.
This is one of my absolute FAVORITE fics. Props to ya man, props to ya.
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I know it seems kind of sketchy, but it's worth it I promise
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WHY DO I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!?
Most excellent good sir/madam
And now.. THE EMPRA'S FUREH needs to be a part of this story
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Even a Chaos Space Marine cannot resist the D'aawww of pinkie pie covered in gore.
BLOOD! BLOOD! FOR THE SLAUGHTER!!!
<3 DarqFox
Well I'm cracking up!
Yeah, I pretty much am dying laughing now. I need to model shoulder ponies for one or two of my Chaos dudes now. My chaos army is messed up: First Chaos Kitties, now Chaos ponies.
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You have to have Pinkie in your army or it's not real. Also, pics or it didn't happen.
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There is soo much beauty in this chapter, I am surprised my computer didn't blow up because of it.
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There are just no words
....
What in the world did I just read?
Where are the Alpha Legion? All the other traitor legions have representatives there if I counted correctly (other than the Night Lords but they don't like Abbadon and would have let him rot) so where are they?
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There's no Death Guard and there are already two representatives of Chaos Undivided whereas most of the gods only have one sole representative besides Slaanesh which only happened because of Octavia and Vinyl. That and I'm not a fan of the Death Guard or the Alpha's.
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The Alpha Legion don't really worship Chaos at all, they're like the Night Lords in that respect. So you have yet to represent the two completely unaligned legions.
I don't really like the Death Guard either, except for Typhus. He's alright.
I bet the Chaos Gods stole the idea from the God Emperor.
Only he could come up with such an awesome idea. 
They shall feel his wrath before the end.
Cursed heretics.
(Great story by the way.)
Ahhh...Glorious. Although, I kinda have to wonder if Pinkie isn't some sort of troll sent by Tzeentch. Either way, Ward will be mad at the fate of his smurfs.
2362728 Ha! That Ward Heresy is in the Warp, remember? See:
2362666Kharn's a pretty cool guy. I'm sure he wouldn't mind. Someone needs to make a Commissar Kharn model now!
Is Pinkie gonna eat Abbadon's arms?
2394896The Alpha Legion are working for the Emprah. Of course they don't worship Chaos.
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Give Indrick Boreale a pony. See the end results.
Or give Alpharius and Omegon Nightmare Moon and Luna.
There are no words for the awesomeness that I just witnessed reading every chapter in a single go.
There just aren't.
For the love of the Chaos Gods, moar.
2401147Actually...1d4chan.org/images/7/7d/Borealemlp.jpg
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Luna and Boreale... Oh god. But it could be Carron and the METAL BAWXES.
Or Sindri and Bale. That reminds me, I need to get that next chapter done.
Again, Holy crap. Love this, love this like a drug addict and what ever drug they're doing. Nice.
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Haha, after I get my Wolves ready for the next convention tournament I'm going to, Pinkie is going all Chaos-y. :P