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It'd be nice to hear people's opinions on if it's gotten better or worse as far as her describing the areas and stuff. Also how are the other characters? Well the ones that aren't knocked out for most of a chapter or two. Oh and how is the pacing?
The heart crushing spell is a bit sudden, no progress toward it, no sudden realization or anything in the like, it would be interesting to see her learning the spell before she could simply use it to crush the heart of her enemies so simply.
Vertibucks make less and less sense, why do the Enclave need any flying machine that don't require pegasi to fly? That's their biggest resource!