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I am a BIG Rarity fan. I am also one of the biggest Gamers you will ever meet. My favorite MLP FIM episode is a tie between A Friend In Deed and A Dog and Pony Show.
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dude... I think you just described me better than I ever could...
2442420 Really? How so?
I... Uh.... That's... Exactly how I've been feeling for the past five years.... ever since my parents got divorced... I..... I'm crying.... I haven't done that after reading a fan fiction since My Little Dashie....
I.... I told you you're a great writer.
2442509 Nah, I just have a lot to express in my writing. What is good isn't my writing, it is the emotions I express in my writing.
This is amazing. (side note : a mom who encourages being a Brony? That's so awesome!) This is some serious, deep poetry. And it's poetry, despite what you might think. It's so moving, so inspirational, it can never be perceived as anything less magnificent.
You didn't have to do this to my feels but you did it anyway.
2442535 Well, thanks. I wasn't expecting such praise.
2442536 You think is feels heavy, try reading Broken.
2442509 then you have been reading the wrong fanfics. Tell me your favorite pony and i'll have you crying in minutes.
As for the story, i liked it. Its emotional and is pretty generalized so lots of people can connect to it. This is in my opinion your best work until now.
The only problem is that the 'i' pony is actually pretty annoying when you see past the things you can connect with. He seems to value himself over other ponies.
Edit: forgot to mention this, but i fail to see how you will continue this while keeping the writing format without it becoming repetetive and tedious to read.
And the pocture is honestly pretty crappy and you should find a new one that does not ooze instagram. Actually, the 'broken' picture is more fit for this story than broken, considering the fact that this story features both the faces while broken is just all sad.
2442523 YOU. ARE. A. GREAT. WRITER.
I will preach this to everyone I meet on the street (Rhyme!)!
You're able to put emotion into your stories.... I'm too afraid! I'm just nerd who gets picked on at school... No one wants to read about that, unless I develop Spider-Powers....
I can't put emotions into my stories.... I'm afraid of failure...
I'm gonna feel like an asshole for posting this but...
I like this, I really do because I feel it relates to me, but the writing of it is just... I don't like it, the repetition comes too fast in the first paragraph and the rest is just written in ways that don't appeal to me.
Dear
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I really enjoyed working with you!!!!!!! It was very rewarding and healing to write with you...Looking forward to many more!!!!
2442945 If you never try, you will never succeed. Do not be afraid of failure or ridicule. You have much more to offer than you think. You are not just anything. You are my friend, and I am proud to call you friend. Try writing about your experiences, you would be surprised at the feedback you receive.
2446234 Thanks, man.
2446254 No problem. Tis what I am here for, to encourage people. You have a hecka lot more inside you than you are aware of. I can see the potential you have, and it is amazingly awesome.
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2466295 Thanks. It never ceases to amaze me when people not only like what I write, but have such praise for it. I never really thought of this being anything more than a one shot, but you make a good point.
This isn't an entertainment fic. It looks like it's a philosophy one.
2517996 Take it for what you will. Everyone has a different way of looking at things. Writing, which I look at as art, speaks different things to different people. I wrote this as a way to get out my tiredness.
you always need ponies to hang out with. if you don't have any... it makes life rather dull. I know how you feel man. I do have friends up here, but none of them are bronies, so I basically have to keep all my feels to myself.
I'm lucky to have good IRL friends, aren't I? I always take that for granted.
3079764 It is something I wish I still had.
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If I ever end up wherever you live, I'll PM you. That's a Pinkie Promise! Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!
3079783 Thanks, I appreciate that.
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If people consider you Pinkie, then consider me Dashie. I try my hardest to never let my friends down. And you, sir, are a true, true friend.
3079806 Ya know, if I hadn't discovered this site, I can't even begin to imagine what my life would be like.
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Same here. I still would have been the antisocial closet brony I started out as. You all changed that, starting with Sonic Mario3. Thank you.
P.S. For some reason, I'm crying, and I almost never cry.
3079820 Sometimes, there is no logical reason for tears.
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*sniff* i know, but it's just strange. I didn't cry at my great grandparents died. I just got deprsssed. So why am I crying? I try to look for logic, I feel I have bits of the Mane Six inside my own personality.
3079842 Tears are a release. Maybe, reading this released something in you.
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Yeah, maybe. Thanks, man, and I hope you get out of your own funk soon.
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Since we are doing this, I call Twilight just cause of my knowledge and quest for more.
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Sonic is Rarity. Slendermane is AJ.