"More lemonade sir?" asked the hot girl in the yellow bikini.
"Yes, please," you say while she fills your glass.
"If you need anything else just let me know."
"It looks like you need to put more sun tan lotion on," you exclaim.
"I guess you're right. Do you mind doing it for me?" she replies.
"Not at all!"
You then start to put the lotion all over her exposed body. Feeling all the curves, you massage her while you apply the sun tan lotion. This earns you an audible moan from the mouth of this hot girl.
"Mmmm that feels real good, but I think I'm going to play with my friend in the water now," she exclaims.
Not realizing that you were on a beach, an ocean appears out of nothingness. Looking out towards the horizon, you can see a girl playing in the water. You identify her as none other than Pinkie Pie, and she is also wearing a bikini. The hot girl runs and jumps into the water with Pinkie and they begin to splash each other.
"Wow this water is so cool and refreshing!" shouts Pinkie Pie,"but these bathing suits are sooooo uncomfy."
"Why don't we take them off?" responds the girl in the yellow bikini.
"Fantabulous idea!"
They both begin to untie the strings of their bikinis, but before they can finish you begin to fall through a dark hole. Just before you hit the ground, you wake up.
Looking at the ceiling, you become very upset at the fact that your wet dream just ended.Son of a... Your thoughts were interrupted by a soft thud on your chest. Looking down at your chest, you notice a white bunny sitting there.
"Hey there little guy, what is your name?" you say to the bunny. "Do you know that you stopped one of the best dreams of my life?" The bunny however doesn't respond, but just looks across to the other side of the room. You looks as well and notice that there is a carrot on top of a shelf.
"I bet you're hungry!" you exclaim. You reach up, grab the carrot, and then give it to the white bunny. While on the other side of the room, you start to examine your roommates stuff. There is a cage at the foot of the bed, where you assume the bunny goes when it's bed time. The bed itself catches you by surprise when you look at the sheets. They were a light green with a yellow and pink trim on them.Guess my roommate is just one of those guys. Then you look inside their closet area, but something is unusual about their clothes. They are clothes that a girl would wear. You move back over to your bed and begin to think.
Is my roommate a cross dresser? I suppose everyone is different, but this is something I'm not used to. Maybe I should go talk to Pinkie about this.........wait! If Pinkie is on this floor, then that means...
Before you could finish conclusion, the door creaks open and a girl walks in. It happens to be the same girl you ran into earlier today.
"Hello, my name is,"
"AAAAAHHHHHHH!" she yells before you can finish your sentence. She then runs out of the door into the hall. "APPLEJACK, HELP ME!...... If that's ok with you." A tall girl with blonde hair and freckles steps out of her dorm with a bat and spots you in the hall.Oh Shit.
"Run," calmly says the tall girl.
"With pleasure," you respond. The chase begins.I better try to get to Pinkie's dorm. Never in your life had you ran this fast, but you were never the fastest person in high school. It wasn't long before the blonde catches up with you and tackles you.
"How dare ya try ta harm poor little Fluttershy!" That's her name.....probably should explain myself.
"I wasn't trying to..."
"Don't ya lie ta me ya pervert! Don't ya start ta try to lie with that silver tongue of yers!"
"But I...."
"Shut yer trap!" She snaps back. Although she scares you, you kind of like her sitting on your chest.She has some nice ti
"Applejack, what are you doing? Are you having a party without me?!"
"Pinkie, does it look like we're having a party?" Applejack responded.
"Hmmmmmmm.......I suppose not, but what are you doing to my new friend?"
"Friend? This friend of yers was in Fluttershy's dorm like a disgustin perv!" She snaps back.
"Well duh he was in Fluttershy's dorm, he is her new roommate," says the curly headed girl.
"Beg yer pardon?"
"Didn't he tell you?"
"I tried, but it didn't work out so well," you respond.
"But he's a boy sugar cube, Applejack responds "boys ain't allowed in these dorms."
"Celly told me to take him to Fluttershy's dorm," Pinkie replies.
"Hmmmm...... well I better get off em." Damn.
She gets off you and helps you to your feet.
"Name's Applejack, sorry bout that?"
"It's ok, I can see why you would want to take me down."
"Where's Fluttershy, Applejack?" says Pinkie.
"Sugar cube has locked herself in er room. Something tells me she's not goin ta open tha door fer a while."
Well this is a fine mess I've gotten into. But at least I know her name now. Fluttershy. Even her name sounds elegant. But my chances with her are slim I bet.
"Don't fret none sugar cube, we'll calm her down," Applejack reassures,"she's just scared is all. Just sit down, it might be a while."
Fine mess indeed
I wouldn't mind waiting a week for a chapter.
Ur fanfic is going great so far and I like the shorter frequent chapters better. I like the fact that the guy sleeps in the girls dorm xD.
2453338 is something wrong my friend
2453406
nah. just kinda odd
also, shorter more frequent chapters please?
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well the story is doing good so far, i wouldnt mind wait a week for a longer chapter.
and that guy is sleeping in the girls room .. with the girl he likes for roommate. You lucky bastard!!!
Viva la Revolución aquí también!!!!
ps:Yeah i actually speak spanish
2453747 Bien. Hablo ingles pero no me gusta verga.
2454500 y porque no? es útil. y cuidado que después los que no entienden se cabrean y nos mandan a la mierda así como: Speak fucking english you two. o algo asi
2454564 question, do you see a pink picture next to my comments?
2454585 if you meen the profile image, what i see its fluttershy with a "deal with it" face. if you meen another image them no i don't
2454640 thank goodness, because this same picture is all over my comments on my page
2454691 really? weird. but it looks like only you can see it so its not a problem
2454716 I'm calling it a night, got the title of the next chapter
2454723 sure dude, seeya tomorrow i guess
2454564 Hablad inglés, vosotros dos, joder XD
2454723 Why is the main character such a pervert? Wait, thats me... So... What?
Wait some more... If Flutters has her own chamber, and all the others are in pairs... Another one is on her own, so... Trollestia...
This is going to end weird, isn't it?
ofcourse applejack has a bat
2454982 did you traslate that or you speak spanish?
and yeah i think its gonna end very weird ... and we are going to love it
2456474 I do not just speak spanish... I am Spanish! Huzzah!
2454982 everyone is screwed
2456566 Literally. IYKWIM
Edit: IF YOU DON'T KNOW, I MEAN THEY ARE ALL GONNA F*** LIKE PIGS
2456584 Giggity, just kidding, no clop!
2456707 ... If you manage to end this "immaturely" (with some sense) you will earn my eternal respect
2456729 that might be difficult
2456832 of course it might be difficult. noone can make a college story without sex or in theory very provocative scenes.
2457273 Exactly, I'm just having problems writing the third chapter. Might be hard for me to post a new chapter by midnight
2457353 well, if you need help with anything,
not that i'm good with storiesbut i have some good idea with time2457273 He said no-clop! How? Only time will tell (His story will also tell)
College + no clop = Eternal Respect
2457510 this guy is living with in the girls room with the shy girl everyones love and in college!!! and 0 clop!!! i dont think its posible but who knows.
and now speaking of your math i have something to say:
EH= Cp + F x (C / [G x 6]) / %SCS
EH:Eternal happiness
Cp:Clop
F:Friendship
C:College
G:Girls
SCS:Some complex story
2457582 If you want clop, you're going to have to write it yourself. Of course I would like you to ask permission first.
2457582 genius, pure genius
2457582 I think your formula... Makes no sense :S
2457593 Me no wants clop, ergo me happy :D
2457605 well i'm not very good writing clop so thats out of the subject. i'm actually planning a story with a friend but its more like an adventure story so ... yeah
and i know i'm a genius thank you by the way
2457634 Because that formula its to complex for you
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2457654 but... I... But!... ... 4th dimension is best dimension!! Also, YOU CANNOT DIVIDE SOMETHING BY A PERCENTAGE!!!
2457723 and where is the rule that doesnt allow that?
do you see it Pinkie?
No i don't see it Vecty!!!
I close my case
Almost done with chapter 3
Boop.
Also side note the comment about AJ's breasts is either incomplete or meant like that not sure.
If its susposed to be like that then try using a - at the end of it.
2458028 incomplete on purpose
This story is so unrealistic. A guy wakes up from a wet dream and doesn't rub "it" off.
2459093
he probably was going to, but saw the bunny on his chest. I understand how he got distracted.
2457723
Did you ever do complex interest equations in algebra? Trust me, you CAN divide by a percentage , just convert it into a decimal.
2457723 Actually... Algebra 2. You can indeed devide any number by a percentage. It comes out as another percentage.