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You're so generous. Owie...
Poor Lero, and that spider is so clever using him as bait. At least Rarity is going to save the day. Much to Lero's confusion.
I imagine that when Lero dies his soul might be debated over by whatever higher power exists. Twilight would petition for his soul to go to pony afterlife.
... All right, I concede. It is possible. Unlikely, but possible.
Now explain the shock of being stabbed thousands of times and the inevitable sepsis.
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Yay! "Sepsis!" I just learned a new word!
My explanation is: Lero's body is blessed with the same resistance to death as Rasputin. He CAN be killed, but he can take a LOT of punishment.
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Yep, Twilight would. That'd be a neat little debate to see!
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2471752 Perhaps part of his, ah, prior experience included certain enhancements to make him more durable so the fun could be doubled. For them, obviously. He wasn't meant to have fun, that would ruing the game.
Aaaaaaanyway yes, I promised something more constructive and then completely disappeared. To be frank constructive criticism isn't my thing but I wanted to encourage you to keep going with this. Despite the rather icky content of the current chapter there's been a lot of light-hearted and entertaining moments so far. Everything has been just... just fine.
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"Perhaps part of his, ah, prior experience included certain enhancements to make him more durable so the fun could be doubled."
-- 'Enhancements' for durability, you say? I love the way you think, sir!
Aaaaaaanyway yes, I promised something more constructive and then completely disappeared. To be frank constructive criticism isn't my thing but I wanted to encourage you to keep going with this. Despite the rather icky content of the current chapter there's been a lot of light-hearted and entertaining moments so far. Everything has been just... just fine.
-- Well, I'm glad you approve! I'll tell you this: in spite of every horrible thing Lero's gone through in this chapter... I assure you that "Divided Rainbow" is not meant to be a gorefest horror story. The reason why I subjected him to the likes of the Bramble Tower and Mr. 7... it'll all be made plain as the story progresses, I promise.
Please, if you could, spread the word to all your friends about this story!
Well, Lero, just got Frodo in his ass, and was torture for who knows how many days. I bet he still paralyzed and in his condition, returning to Ponyville will be suicidal, his only option is that when Rarity kill that spider (And she will make slowly) she will take Lero to the minotaur country as fast as she can't (unless she knows the teleportation spell) and boy if it will be confuse it, when Rarity will start to pounce Lero with quick kiss, depth kiss and french kiss, something tells me he will reach the minotaur country cover in lipstick
owch! thorns from hell @w@ damn this chapter was intense! looks like rarity will have her revenge completly and utterly Pissed Off!
Well, that bit with the spider eating the minotaur was downright terrifying and nauseating. I have never been afraid of spiders, but I'm starting to reconsider.
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I actually really did a lot of research on many different species of spiders before settling on just how Mr. 7 hunted prey.
They're ALL rather frightening creatures -- as much for their behavior as their appearance. Spiders feed by liquifying the insides of their prey, and cannibalism is VERY common among them, (a few spider species ONLY feed on OTHER spiders.) They can be incredibly cunning for creatures of such a small size, (easily able to outthink the insects that serve as their prey.)
I wanted to capture some of that ruthless cleverness with Mr. 7, instead of having him be just a dumb ugly bug with too many legs, like most fantasy stories.
Great story, but i really tought the spider was going to
rape himkill him.Or take him to the spidy-cave
For some reason this is the "theme Music" I was hearing in my imagination for this long distance marathon chase and "loved one in peril" chapter...
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It maybe my cynicism poking through, what little is left, but there was a lot of exposition on the build up to spider scene. Then again I'm impatient like that at times. Still I'm hooked like a trout!
I love this story.
It is a great addition to one of my favorite stories from this fandom.
But as a man with a mild case of arachnophobia i have one one thing to say to this chapter.
FUCKFUCKNOFUCK KILL IT KILL KILL IT FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK NO FUCK BURN WITH THE FIRE OF A THOUSAND SUNS
also
2488282 how does one get raped by a spider?
3203022 I think that question is better left unanswered.