Lightning Moon is the son of an alicorn duchess Vinara in the city of phillydelphia, in the land of Equestria. He gives the guards a hard time and always has for thousands of years. Until one day his mother is fed up with his hi jinx and decides that to earn a little more decorum she will send him to meet his arranged betrothed, Luna. Which is news to him. What will become of our hero? reed more to find out.
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Quite interesting i like where this is going, will he become an ally to
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247398 well let me just say this. expect some twits and some drama.
Structure and grammar are a little iffy in some places, but there's potential for hilarity
"Yah right and pink ponies can eat a whole cake in one bite… that was random. "
pinkie pie, i'm on to you.... I know your game...
Wait a sec ... a thousands year without getting laid
... also if he marry's Luna.....hilarity soooo much hilarity
this is very good
I know you know you need a Grammar Nazi
I happen to be one and would like to help you
I'm kinda bored as well
also
I'm gonna follow you just to see what you put in your blog
Interesting, so Luna doesnt know either... oh trollestia your so crazy.
297673 originally there was a link to the trololololol guy singing his song and it was MUCH funnier to think that she orchestrated the whole scene with the guards falling asleep and then the chase after that
300091i can always change it back but its kinda late now. or do you guys want to vote for it or something? i don't know
whatever makes my readers happy
301665 YES! Let's vote on that
Lulu- I think that would be wonderful!
Moonfire- OH SH!!!!!!!!!T!*disappears in a cloud of dust*
Interesting to say the least. Keep building things up mate,and it'll get interesting. Other than that,flawless(hmm...) writing,no errors. Good job!
"(A/N wow innuendo anyone?)"
If you didnt put it there i would have thought he really did fall into her haunches head first. That would be a great start of a wonderful relationship that cant fail at all nu uh.
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Good new chapter with lots of awkward and secret butt fun situations.
If ya think Lightning's lucky. that lucky bastard, gettin' married to Luna. Dream come true for me. I envy him SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much right now. My alicorn Oc, (NOT THE ONE I HAVE AS A AVATAR HS NAME IS EPIC.) Cyrus would kill to marry Luna. He is in a story i recently got uploaded. Read it if ya would like. Anyway good, no great, no that don't fit either. THERE IS NO WORD TO DESCRIBE HOW AWESOME THIS STORY IS!!!!!!!!!! RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGE!!!!!!!!!
I Go
370012 awwwwww
thanks
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No prob.
I Go
Yay! Perfect fo the library!
Well look on the bright side Lightning, if your mom really does kill you, then you won't have to continue living for hundreds of years while watching your friends grow old and die.
, Gallows humor.
Read chapter 2. Didn't know what had happend. Realised that I hadn't read chapter 1 yet. Read chapter 1 second.
"I ran to grab her “WAIT don’t leave me here!” and she was gone. I face planted into Luna’s carpet. (A/N wow innuendo anyone?)" Silly author, you're not supposed to put the author's note. What you're supposed to do is have Pinkie Pie just pop in and say, "Good night everypony!"
Good story by the way.
So sorry. started geting conflicted as to where the story goes and wrighters block and other problems so hope this is up to par with my other work. also let me know where i went wrong if i did kay
ON THE MMMOOOOOOONNNNN!!
Morning boners, boner puns and Celestia asking if he likes bananas...
MORE
You might wannna go over the chapter again. I'ce noticed mistakes aling the way,gramnar or otherwise. Other than that,for once the alicorn isn't a Gary Stu...or at least isn't much. I'm gonna see where this is going
You need to get a spell checker. Andgrammer checker :3
Other than that, I found no problems. Morning wood is for teh lulz
you'll go bananas ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON BIATCH
THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*freezes and stares at it*
STOP MOCKING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!
I reread and corrected a few grammar and spellcheck mistakes but other then the ones I caught let me know specifics
453443 One of the errors that I caught was "“Common Celestia-“" and "common be serious". I think that what you meant to say in both of them was "Come on" not "common". Other than that, great story.
Also, I know where you can go bannanas. On The MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONA.
454056 done and done thank you
You're welcome.
Excuse me good sir???
Were did you find that background???
and......
JOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLYGOOOOOOOOOOODSHOOOOOOOOOOW
ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTCH
460767 I made it myself with photo shop using the pony editor and these two pictures.
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NOT easy it took me over an hour.
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Space,spacein space goign to space in space.
Spacein space I love space going to spaceI'm in space we madeit space.
Playit coool
Plat it cool here come spacecops helpme space cops helpme spacecops.
SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACE
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I okay with this
I carry the not-very mighty torch of sixth. also, I know a pink pony that can eat a whole cake in one bite.
meh.
*insert hate comment*
well good luck with the story, hope it wont take to long to finish.
While I hate that this story has to go on hiatus, I am willing to wait for you to finish your other story first. May you do very well on that one, and not make us wait for very long to get back to this one, and then may you continue to do very well on this story.
*shrugs then trots off* good luck with yo new story. cant wait till its up.
this could be worse but i don't think you have enough viewers to get spammed with haters.
Ok yes that was a hate comment im sorry
Only just found this, it has promise so i look forward to when you get back to writing it
as well as reading this other story your writing
This... is a HATE comment!