Hi this is my fic if you see things that are not kid safe please tell me I try to keep my stuff pretty G Rated but if there's bad stuff I didn't see I will fix it
This is a story about the time an evil guy named Brony made a bad Rainbow Dash clone but don't worry I am sure nice stuff will happen in it too maybe I will add some kittens.
is interesting
not is exactly a large comment but continue soon
XD
Username: Trollolol.
:/
You need to be more subtle. As a trollfic it isn't bad enough, the grammar, punctuation, plot and story structure are all pretty bad but there are nowhere near enough spelling mistakes. Also, a trollfic without gore, clop, or both? Ambitious. That said, I like the touch of randomly CAPSLOCKING words for no reason.
6/10, mediocre trollfic.
Thank you for reading my story
This is truly brilliant! I hope to read more of it soon! I must know if Rainbow Dash manages to escape the evil Brony and defeats her evil clone!
The CMC are so funny.
Spitfire said something important, right? ;)
Yay! I want to see this made into an episode so badly. I'll even script it!
Spit Fire had a lot of nice things happen to her as did everyone ever because SPOILLLLLLLLLLLLLER
the villain was defeated
Sorry if the paragraphs are bad. When I copied it over it ate all my indents I tried to fix it though.
Sock pun. Really?
Noooo!!! Evil Pinkie.