Why I write "There's A Changeling on My Couch" the way I do. · 4:04am Nov 15th, 2013
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Thanks RavensDagger for posting this.
I figure if I am going to pretend to be a bat pony named Super Trampoline, I might as well go all the way, right? and besides, Super Trampoline is a pretty memorable name, and pays a nod to one of my favorite rock groups.
Just so y'all know.
So yesterday I got the following message from EQD regarding my "There's a Changeling on my Couch" story:
I cannot recommend this for posting.
Reasons for rejection:
Capitalization
Uninspiring opening (poem + weather report)
Map is somewhat difficult to decipher and looks bad
Compound word hyphenation
Awkward shifts to second person
Awkward phrasing
Hyphen/dash confusion
Spacing
General punctuation
Missing end-of-sentence punctuation
SWIGGITY SWAG!
I DREW ART!
So, not bad for first try and first time seriously attempting drawing in years :)
You'll find a cropped version in Chapter 1, with a link to the larger uncropped version. Expect much more art to come!
I think I've found what mineral they are going to be mining in Sparkler: Herbertsmithite. It has a cool weird name, and dig this paragraph:
So I woke up this morning and felt an urge to make Pinkie Pie interact with Flashpan. Though I forgot to include the part where Flashpan realizes his name makes no sense. Oh well. Here are some random things regarding There's a Changeling On My Couch .
I'm on a roll. I like chapter 22. The second half adds some emotional and philosophical depth to Ereton and Flashpans' budding relationship. Thank you my single follower, you'll see this blog post. I hope you enjoy the story!
Right now, 6 of the 7 featured new stories on the front page have the sex tag, and 5 of those have the mature tag. This is why i don't show FimFiction to my non brony friends, at least not the front page. It gives a bad impression about us. I have not much against clop, but this seems obsessive. I can't remember who, but I remember someone saying "FimFiction changed to a softcore porn site so slowly I didn't even notice."
Oh well. New chapter up for my story. Go read it!
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!
Actually it's an interview. I hope people like it. Hurry up submission board people!!!