610468 ehhh most of them were most likely Rainbow Dash super fans, But you had an base for an good story although I think it may be better not in second person but its a base for a good story that can be expanded upon. Like maybe make it an revenge story like Dash as an Adult kills him or Dash tells this to an lover and he or she goes kill him. Don't let negative comments put you down it's your first story after all and after reading it I do say you do have a lot of potential to be a good writer.

609131it was getting a lot of dislikes and I honestly felt pretty embarrassed.

awww why did you take Teddy down? I liked that Fic. Been awhile since I read a good dark story.

I love your name, and everything about you.