So, I've been writing part four, and I've hit a snag. I've written myself into a corner, of sorts. There is really no way for the story to progress past a point, because the only forwards is lots of bloodshed and violence. The only hope I really have at this point is to rewrite a massive chunk of the story. Hopefully, the section with Fluttershy should do, but how the fuck I'm meant to have the normally shy Pegasus deal with a behemoth about thirteen foot tall and four foot across is beyond

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“So, Twilight; what’s with that... what was her name again?”
“Lyra.”
“Ah, yes, Lyra, thank you.” Excolotis nodded, “What was with Lyra?”
“Well,” said Twilight, “she’s always believed that some sort of fantasy creature called a human exists, and she thinks that you are one.”
“Oh, but I am one.” Said Excolotis, “In fact, all of Ponydom is nothing more than a failed attempt to create a slave race so that mankind could live in luxury, free from menial chores.”

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I'm writing part four, where we larn a bit more about the history of Excolotis, and just how powerful he really is. I'll also explain the relationship he had with the royal sisters.

While listening to this... Remix of skyrim; sons of skyrim metal mix. LOOK IT UP! NOW!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gyCFuP3rM2w&feature=related

anyway, the next chapter will be a few days, but mostly because I was already well into finishing Pt 3 when i posted the story, just so you know.

What the fuck was I THINKING!?

So, yeah, Excolotis is the god of war. Whoop de fucking dodad!

This was one of the chapters I won't like, ever, but I don't see how much better I could of have made it. Consider it bad subject material.

Celestia getting Rainbow Dash to do her spying for her. Ironic? Considering what she said maybe two years ago now: "Are you a SPY!?" Rerember that?

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Belive it or not, I am War has been written for a while now. And when I posted it it was well into it's third chapter. Also, did you know that chapter one was originally in two parts? it's true. The reason for that is because i needed to, to put it quite simply, make sure that my Deviant Art was working. But now I've hit a snag. What the fuck does discord look like under the armour?! well, here's the idea. He's human, and before you go 'RUINED FOREVER' hear me out.

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