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TheFimFicCritic


From the state of Ohio. I am 25 and a certified S.C.U.B.A Diver. I enjoy writing poetry and have intentions only to give support to writers and hope they will support me

Aug
11th
2014

Gaming Thoughts: Amnesia The Dark Descent · 3:23am Aug 11th, 2014

"Amnesia: The Dark Descent”
Thoughts

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Jul
5th
2014

Why does Celestia get less love? · 11:43pm Jul 5th, 2014

In all honesty it seems Luna gets more love because she is the tragic princess. But why does Celestia receive the thorn when luna gets the rose? Well really it is a matter of perspective. In other peoples eyes Luna is the most attractive because of her sad backstory, when they look at Celestia they see the pony who banished her sister. However when I look at Celestia I see the pony she is and not the princess. In my eyes Celestia is like every other pony with a longer lifespan. She had to make

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Apr
18th
2014

Music Review: Journey "Send Her My Love" · 2:55am Apr 18th, 2014

“Send Her My Love”
Journey
Music Review

Hello everyone! Since I did a music review on Steve Perry’s “Missing You” I decided to make a list of songs I wanted to review. No there will not be any music from today, seeing as how I find that artists are now more concerned about the money. Why exactly did I decide to do this? Even though nobody bothered to give feedback, I decided to do this because I had a lot of fun doing it.

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Apr
2nd
2014

A Music Review · 9:35pm Apr 2nd, 2014

“Missing You” By Steve Perry


You all know Steve Perry, lead vocalist of Journey right? I am Sure you all do. But I think you may not be aware of his solo performances. So, today we are looking at the song “Missing You” from Steve Perry’s 1994 album “For The Love Of Strange Medicine”. Sit back, relax, and enjoy.

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Feb
15th
2014

Todays quartet music pieces. · 4:20pm Feb 15th, 2014

Okay first off, I have done some quartet pieces for choir and may I say I am surprisingly disappointed at the use of music. A quartet piece is only supposed to use each of the members voices to carry on the beat and sound. Oh can't forget the whole NO FUCKING AUDIO TUNING. A quartet as you are no doubt aware is a group that consists of 1 Tenor, 1 Bass, 1 Alto, and 1 Saprano. So the fact Studio B got it through their thick skulls to add music, completely taking away the voice quality for each

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Jan
5th
2014

My Ocean Home · 4:38pm Jan 5th, 2014

My Ocean Home

The blue ocean, it is my second home.
So much beauty that can not be shown in one tome.
inspireing many ideas with in me.
Whether poetic or not,I find it hard to let them be.

What am I without the sea? Non-existant as I could be.
There is so much to learn and even more see.
The waves calm the, metaphoricle, storm in my mind,
As the scent of salt in the wind makes me smile in kind.

When on a dive vessel before I put on my gear,

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Jan
1st
2014

happy new year · 11:54pm Jan 1st, 2014

well today I have been spending time with my family singing karaoke, though I only sang songs from Journey... Your probably wondering why only Journey. if I were to go ahead and critique their songs we would be here forever. So I won't bore you with the details. However, today I thought back to my first ever ocean dive in North Carolina and decided to write a poem about my experience. It still needs editing but before I did any writing I got a random flash back to my favorite moment of dive.

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Dec
12th
2013

A poem I wrote about 2 years ago during school. I was a sophmor in highschool · 9:14pm Dec 12th, 2013

Depression's grey and God's light

My life is just a dark shade of grey,
As for which of my dues shall I pay?
To bring happiness and light?
Or to fall and lose all my might?

How many times a year does my heart cry?
A countless many for sure but the pain is nigh.
How many nights have I longed for a someone to hold?
Instead of a pillow which is lifeless and cold.

The cold feeling of the pain is like a knife driving into my heart.

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Dec
9th
2013

A fresh start on writing about ponies. · 10:48pm Dec 9th, 2013

Hello to every one who has taken time to look at my profile. I know it is nothing flashy and I intend to keep it that way. my story writing is... well bad I think. On playfire.com I posted a second person Dead Space story and everybody who reads it always gives me positive feed back. It was only about 720 or so words and since I won't post the story I will put it into my first blog post. this is only to show you how bad I am at writing stories. poetry is more my style. anyways here is the short

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