yeah i know i was working on sweetie bells, but i scrapped it. it wasnt my favorite really. anyways, i just finished derpys, but it took me like two hours. i just kept writing and writing and writing. i just didnt know how to end it. i know its long and drawn out and the lesson at the end is kinda eh, but id like your feedback really, cause i probably want to edit it a bit. i just dont know what went wrong...

well, im working on both right now. im not sure which will get done first.any preferences anypony? sweetie belle is feeling shunned by friends and family. spike is worried about growing up. just to give you an idea of what i have right now.

so ive noticed a few people are tracking the bbss. anyways, i was hoping people would leave some comments. as much as im sure you all enjoy my work, i was hoping for some feedback. anything really. even just "hey this is great" or "hey this sucks" anything really. im always looking to make my work more appealing and just better in general. anyways, thanks to everypony who is watching or has favorited it! it does mean a lot in and of itself.

so i finished chapter 3 with vinyl and i looked back and saw that it was pretty long. a full 4 pages actually. i wondered why but there is just a lot of dialog. its a big conversation between scratch and octavia about scratch needing to take a break and her fans understanding. im not sure if i like it the way it is write now and may go back and edit it later to be a bit different. (should anyone actually read this) please tell me what you think, cause i like it, but its not my favorite. thank

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working on the third chapter right now (not that anyones listening or waiting really but hey, whatever haha). anyways, its either going to be spitfire or vinyl, whoever i finish first.