So, I've been plotting over what I could do with this next chapter when it hit me, and I was all "Why did you hit me dude?"

"Sorry man, Hand slipped." Came the reply.

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Ok, I mashed chapters one and two together to form a more stable opening chapter. Sorry if this change confused you but I felt it needed to be done.

The notification that people are watching me always sounds like a creepy movie line, anyway, If you read this blog post I would honestly like a critique on my story, things you think i did well, things I could improve, it would help out with the writing of future chapters. Thanks for your time. -N64Fan

HiE, Techno-Babble in Equestria or T-BiE (as I've been loving calling it) is up and I couldn't be happier with the initial response.