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a new ending its so hard to find book that i havent read before (that hadent got my attention) and that one was one of those it was really well made tho the part of the betrayal of Chrysalis was a little fast for my taste i had to read that part two more time before actually getting what happened

Hey man, thanks so much for the watch! Mind me asking what done it?

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what i liked so far is that your character isn't "part of the problem" yet, so to speak. One of the thing i hate about RGRE is usually that the main character is to much of a dumb ass to comprehend that the ponies are being blatantly sexist, or they do know, and they to much are the kind of man the ponies they think he is that its just sad. This is a human being coming from a world where men would gladly use guns to shoot spiders off their arm because its funny or cool, or heck the human race is a race that's motivated by their curiosity, i could so easily wind up reading a book where a human learns of these reverse gender roles quickly and starts using them to troll the locals. IE: going completely super sport guy and go off the deep end trying to do extreme stuff to give mares heart attacks. If there is one recommendation for your story that i have is that you can have at least Luna and Celestia be much much more subtle about there way of treating stallions because the remember a time when stallions were much more abundant and were less of the pushovers the stallions of today are. with them living so long they could be witness to the event that made to stallions numbers go though the ground. You could even make Luna be completely nonsexist due to here long time banishment to the moon and say that the event happened while Luna was on the moon and is having a hard time adjusting to the fact stallion where no longer the brave soldiers who would gladly go to war for their country. in gonna end my thing here i love over thinking stuff and making details on every thing i can im just to lazy to put them into a story of my own.

1. I know english well
2. do have enough motivation to finish the sto
3. I know next to nothing of commas and the like