Dialog practice for my Fanfic. Criticism is welcome. · 4:36am Jul 21st, 2023
This may be a potential scene in my fanfic but for now its just practice.
Henchman and Laetum were at sugarcube corner at night helping pinkie pie finish a batch of cupcakes for the school of friendship's one year anniversary. Henchman steps out to take a breath of fresh air until He hears something in the darkness and sees Orion.
“Hey Henchman.” called Pinkie Pie, “can you grab me some of those sprinkles on the top shelf please?”
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Exactly.
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you mean practice?
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Exactly. You just need to keep sharpening it.
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Sharpen it. am I right?
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Let's say it's like a sword. Aside from polishing the blade, what do you need to do to keep it battle worthy?