The next chapter it out and i hope you all enjoy it. I now have a pre-reader which is awesome and means that I will have less grammatical errors.

Love you guys.

there is a cool and awesome page on facebook for bronies to share stories both person or your own mlp fiction stories, artwork and videos. Its awesome for making friends and the best bit.....its also part gaming. If you want more people to game with on any console or PC then just add them or they'll add you.

im there fairly often too (im part admin temporarily, so if you're interested im the one known as -Defiler.)

https://www.facebook.com/pages/PwnyVille/190113614439447?fref=ts

if anyone would like to draw cover art then that would be swell, the current one is no longer needed because the story took an unexpected turn. you will receive credit and you can say what happens in one of the chapters as a reward if i use yours. thanks if you try. if not, then just have fun reading it.

i really need you lot to help me here.

im 16 and am able to join the army if i have my parents permission. i have my dads but not my mothers. what would you suggest i go into? air force? Navy? Army?
i dont know what to choose.

it will be a few more days before the next chapter but i wanted to get something out for all who liked my story.

the new chapter is out and the next one will be a coupe of day because i want them to long and detailed

my story is updated and is re written to a better standard. please re-read and give any advice or criticism