Descending the Pit · 4:11am Feb 4th, 2012
I need somepony to give me some advice on my story.
Like certain areas I can improve on.
I really have no clue as to what I could do since i'm a novice writer but the story is setting there glaring at me to be changed, but i'm not sure what I could do to change it.
any advice is welcome.
Thank you so much for the Fave of Shine!
Didn't know you had a story, now I feel yet another must be read!
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To be perfectly honest, I'm not actually "popular" at all....
Well, I don't think so anyways.
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Yes 3, it's hard to be as popular as you!
But I have many aquatints who I have conversations with. But few I have on regular occasion, talk to.
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Lol.
And oh? Three people eh?