I was just completely jaded one day, bored of 9th grade, (obviously) and I finished my homework early one night, (9:45PM) so I decided to write a non-gore story. Yes. Non-gore. That means actually using 'emotion.' I tried to incorporate a few Elements of Comedy in there, but I don't know if it flew too well... I fear it might be too techy...

Anyways, on with the important stuff. PS. Rated (T) for language. MAYBE some sexual themes might arise in the near future, but I'll cross that bridge when I come to it.
You: Dammit, Swiss! Get on with the important stuff already! I don't need no bucking warnings or insights to the well-being of this story's future! I'm American!
Me: Fine, fine... Here it is.

You're a janitor who used to be an engineer, but you've long-since been fired. One day on your way to work, you meet a nice pony on the train. She turns your miserable life around 180 degrees. Your bro-friends get a bit pissed, as this 'Fluttershy' begins gnawing into your friendship. Some other events also happen, but I haven't got all this sorted out yet. I'm still trying to develop the story and I'd like some suggestions. Thanks everypony out there!

The CMC's try to get their marks, the Everfree Forest begins to decay and two ponies die. That's basically the story.

This is by my friend Joe from America. He gave me permission to post the story, so long as I cite his DeviantArt account, which is SteamPunkPony.Deviantart.com

Anyways, it's pretty good, but I had to go full Grammar-Nazi on the story. Too many lower-case I's and commas after question marks. The cover art is also by him.