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I'm glad to hear that! I am really looking forward to see how the story develops - the ways in which your story goes on to portray Luna as either correct or wrong, and the ways it continues to leave parts of it unknown or visible in different ways.

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When it comes to detailed descriptions like this, I read every single one of them. Thank you for taking the time to provide me with this input. It only makes me want to continue writing.

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I felt a strong sense of truth in both the series of events portrayed in its backstory and Luna's reaction to them - "yes, this is right, this is correct, this is what would happen" from my gut.

Her response to the therapist's life decisions and daily inconveniences really struck me, as did her description of the way she must present a very specific front to others in order to keep them from making the assumptions they have a strong bias toward. These are both well-written and less polite or immediately appealing than I would expect in a story. (I might sympathize with her a little more than I'm meant to.)

Her experience and intelligence is shown in her command of their professional relationship and the way she predicts his behavior and nullifies it. At the same time, there is a strong hint of fallibility - that her own outlook on the world and her own actions toward it continues to drive her position within it, but she attributes all of this to external factors. Her locus of control is too weak.

tl;dr I respect the story so it grips me emotionally and I want to see what happens next.

Thank you for the favorite on Therapist Visit! If I may ask, what is it about the story that made you favorite it?