When I sent out the call for editors, a lot of people responded. I just want to give a quick thanks to all of those that volunteered their services to make my grammatical disaster of a story into something readable. The editors that have been chosen are Nerdbox, and ArtichokeLust. Please give both of these people credit for fighting the war on grammar that I have started.

When I went to bed last night I was not expecting to wake up and see this thing on the premier page. It already has over 100 favorites just in the first 14 hours.

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!

This has exceeded my expectations of just being an average story, and i'm glad that you guys seem to disagree with me on that. Thank you guys for the support.