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OuijaSilverstar
I'm just another Brony that decided to chip in his 2 bits in the creative side of the fandom. Let me know what you think of what I put out there and I hope you enjoy. :)
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I fucking agree!!!!!!!!!!!
Good so far but like you said rushed.
Still good can't wait for next chapter.
Interesting concept and I look forward to it. One issue though. Scorpan is not a Centaur. He's more of a gargoyle like creature.
6697215 Ah, buck; I should take a closer look through the lore. Thanks for pointing that out.
>>Dude can you please update? Pretty good Story.
Sorry about the hiatus; I was working on my Senior Project and my laptop's RAM went. So I got to order a new one. Doesn't help I have to work on 2 projects for school to work on ever two weeks. Don't get me started on my work schedule.
Please Update!
7031327 I'll update as soon as I can. That is if work and school wasn't crawling up my ass constantly like a Yandere girlfriend.
>>I'm thinking of writing a story but school and life can both be a bitch
7034202 Thank God schools out.... Also next update is when?
7282734 If all goes well and if my ADD doesn't act up, it will be done by noon from where I live, if not by the end of today.
7283340 Sweet!
will be reading this
YES! MOTHER OF GOD! YEEEEEESSS! *explodes*
7283340 "Take my Oghma Infinium, and spread it's influence throughout your world..." It's foul speech echoes in your mind's ear, replaying from recent memory. The book was odd, like a poorly bound and constructed art project, left to sit in the arid desert of the Badlands. It's spine appears to be just that, bones mould together, as are the covers of this thing. The thing is bound in what looks to be various pieces of wings, mismatched colors as varying as Discord's, and stitched together like some Frankenstein's Monster. The pages seem to be constructed from some kind of pale leather, and the oddly scrawled writings and sketchings you've glimpsed at are in some rusty hue of red... The book, if the eldritch tome can be called such, shares the same dimensions one of the largest college level texts one can find in a library. It's script is so alien, not even the Princess has been able to recognize it. However, the one hint you received is a phrase that echoes in your skull, whenever you look back at the grimoire... "Azathoth mygh'nyeh." It pulls at your attentions, and never seems to be far from your field of vision for long, even if it's just hovering in the corner of your periphery...
The calls are getting louder, more insistent... When will they stop...
7289645 What are you trying to get at? Badass monologue, though.
7290245 My previous comment was myself providing a Token, should you ever decide to take it up. I thought that providing the entry would do better than just stating my Displaced, what he can do, and his Token; a bit more creative, and (hopefully) a bit more intriguing... The character's modeled after a Lovecraftian Horror, so I figured I'd follow suit.
on the last line you missed the t in "the elements", aside from that I'm loving the story.
7308995 It's been fixed. Apple Auto Correct: both a blessing and a curse, mostly curse.
Please make vergil appear in this
7312101 would be interesting.
7289645 That's definitely one of the most badass Tokens I've ever heard!
Please update...
7367188 Thanks!
Sorry about the wait; been busy IRL.
Let's just say that the next two chapters escalate. I'm sure you know who will be attacking Dante in the next chapter.
KO awesome chapters and story, hope Dante will find the threat and take him down to go enjoy some pizza and strawberry sundae.
KO awesome chapter, Dante and Luna have patch things up from the past and now Dante is a full time Demon Hunter of Equestria. Tough battles will come along and some sexy romance actions as well.
*very annoyed sigh* *tsk* waste of a good bitch
So is this on hiatus? Really hope not.
7890606 No, I just recently set up a new schedule to work on each of my stories on each day of the week. I've also set a New Years Resolution that frankly, I'm lagging behind on.
I hope there isn't going to be another long hiatus. I missed this fic.
IT LIIIIIIIIVES!!!!
KO awesome chapter, Dante first time to Ponyville and he's already feeling that this place is gonna be pretty bizarre and that's the way he like it. Also just out of curiosity, how big are the mares boobs in this story?
YEA PARTY!!! SOMEONE GRAB THE BOOZE!!! IT'S TIME TO PARTY!!!
and oh KEEP MOLLY OUT!! don't want a repeat of last time e.e
KO awesome chapter, Dante sure is having an awesome time with everyone at the party even getting some hits on some mares, though a new enemy will appear to take him down.
IT'S AAAAAAAALLLLLLIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! MMMMMMMMMUUUUUUUUUUUUUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was Gilda wasn't it. If it was then GOD DAMN YOU!
This is the forty second story that I'm tracking
6697215 they called him a Horror from what i remember so let call him that
and its dead again.... im gonna un fav this it takes to long for just to get one chapter out that is shorter then a 1 minute sorry but cool story but takes to long to update
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Butting heads with family, work-related stress burning me out, and random bouts of depression will do that to ya.
This story has a chance. The last Dante story I read was a disappointment mostly due how cringe worthy it was and how hard the writer was trying to make the Displaced be EXACTLY like Dante.
Once I finish reading your story, who knows? I might ask for a future cross-over chapter with you.
KO awesome chapter, Dante might have showed off to Trixie though something tells me that things are about to get worse.
Honestly I was not happy with Dante's reaction. I mean, the maid was killed in front of him and he didn't even seem to care for her. I mean, is she just a set of holes for him? He even was happy to have these enemies with him to fight against his boredom.
I actually expected him to be upset, but the way he reacted he does seem like a big jerk.
Edit: Just read further. It is kind of strange that she was an enemy. I mean, why did they attack her, when she had him all helpless like that? It doesn't make sense.
Not that this changes my opinion stated prior. If she was a normal pony he still wouldn't have cared which is pretty cold.
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That edit was greatly fixed.
You were right; the way I wrote Dante in the chapter pre-edit made him look like an asshole.
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That's cool. It makes him a lot more likable that way.
It is probably something you should look out for in the future. I mean I understand that you want to write your character badass, but if something serious happens he still should act the part. At least that is important if you want him to be seen as caring to a degree and not completely indifferent to the fate and pain of others.
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yea no shit you git XD
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I agree; thanks for opening my eyes a bit more. It greatly helps with people like you giving me tips like that.