The Past of My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic has changed.
It took me many unfinished stories, many unpublished stories, of which most of them are not even in the FIMFiction website yet, and some published stories to finally find the right words to say what I learned of MLP:FIM from season 5 onward.
But alas, none of that matters these days. So here's yet another attempt before MLP:FIM ends, and why I started writing fanfiction. "Last season" I heard.
Now if you Excuse me, I must make new things to do with my life.
What?
What utter horror did I just witness?
Is the writer 8 years old?
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I'm sorry to say this, but this story reads like a bunch of run on sentences and doesn't go anywhere. It really needs a good editor.
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