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Mockingbirb


A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)

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What is it about Sunset and that mirror?

Living in Celestia's palace, does Sunset Shimmer have even one real friend? Or only somepony who LOOKS like one?

(Tragicomic might be be the proper tag, if fimfiction.net had it.)


(Cover image: I made the cover image by editing show art.)

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Comments ( 10 )

This feels like the first chapter of a full story.

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I thought of it as a prequel to canon: Sunset Shimmer went to the Equestria Girls world. So it's a prequel to Equestria Girls.
So ultimately, yes.

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It's a prequel to the "Equestria Girls" movie.

(I spoiler-blocked my other comment too much.)

I just wanna give little Sunset a great big loving and comforting hug as she really needs one as well as a good loyal friend. :heart:

Does this have anything to do with the Incest is Wincest contest? I ask because you put it in there.

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I just rechecked the rules, and a technicality disqualifies this story from that contest. Even though the actual technicality is invisible.

Gloaming bent down to kiss her daughter on the cheek. She whispered in Sunset's ear, "Don't you DARE think of trying to flunk out or get expelled. If you come back home, Gentle is NOT going to be there. If I have to, I'll think of someplace far worse than a castle to send you."

Hm What part of PERSONAL STUDENT TO THE GODLY RULER of Equestria does she not have clear?

"No, it's like they don't notice ANYTHING about me. Because they just want to ignore me." Sunset grimaced. "I think my parents would be happier if I'd never been born. Thank...Celestia, that Celestia was willing to take me in. Otherwise I might not have had anypony even a LITTLE like a mother. Not even temporarily."

I think Sunset went a little too far there. :unsuresweetie:

"My mother's sister. My brother's original parents died before I was born. So he was sent to live with my mom, and her second husband."

So, does that makes him technically her older cousin or am I not a little confused/lost here? :applejackconfused:

"So...Celestia is like a second brother to you."

Technically sister or a mother figure if you ask me. :applejackunsure:

"Rumors spread, and the more they spread, the worse they became. Soon there were ponies whose parents said they weren't allowed to play with me. They said I might be a 'bad influence.' And that's one of the nicer things they said."

That doesn't sound nice at all. :fluttercry:

Sunset waved her forehoof again. "It's fine." As her hoof passed close to the mirror, the surface rippled. Something seemed to draw her in. "WHAT THE--" Sunset shouted, as she lost her balance and fell into the rippling surface.

:pinkiegasp:

https://m.

"And you? Get out of my face."

I'd hate to have her as my mother. :fluttershysad:

"Your mother was very gracious to take me in."

Which is very similar to an anime character I know off. :applejackunsure:

"No!" Gloaming cried. "Not the dungeons! All I ask is, you only punish the ponies who are at fault. My nasty little delinquent...and her sneaky cousin. I know her cousin put her up to this. Throw HIM in a dungeon, and leave my family out of it. She didn't know what she was doing!"

Yeah, I hate her now! :twilightangry2:

Gloaming shook her head. "Something ought to be done about those two." She spoke more loudly. "He's not even her real brother, you know."

Stop ruining the moment bitch! :flutterrage:

Gloaming bent down to kiss her daughter on the cheek. She whispered in Sunset's ear, "Don't you DARE think of trying to flunk out or get expelled. If you come back home, Gentle is NOT going to be there. If I have to, I'll think of someplace far worse than a castle to send you."

Yeah, she should definitely be arrested if she does that. :ajbemused:

Even if her brother had abandoned her, it would be ok. She would MAKE it ok.

He didn't abandoned her he just went off to college. That's seriously not a big deal. :duck:

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