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Can't wait for next chapter 🙂
11054271
Thank you. I appreciate it!
I'm amazed to see a bus running either on Christmas day or at 3:15 am. I wonder if this is a favor, some sort of special trip by a hospital shuttle bus, etc. And that Alan had his phone charger given his attire. Or that he didn't go home to get properly dressed and his own car after dealing with the immediate emergency. Still enjoying the story though and curious where it is leading.
11054771
Ah, I see you can already tell that he has some... influence on others.
And thanks for liking it.
Hahaha haha, that ending line, hahaha. Am I a bad person if I admit, I would probably say the same thing?
It's going good so far
WTF happened between the two of them?! It's like Discord's "relationship" with Celestia/Luna, but worse!
11056703
Thank you, my friend!
11056716
Oh... it's not pretty.
11056723
This reminds of one of those cliche crime/drama shows like Law and Order.
Plus, Luna already solved who Anon-A-Miss is ( CMC, obviously. )? That was really easy?!
And I feel like Alan himself will give a HUGE piece of his mind to those three particular girls, especially the Rainbooms too!!!
11056735
Well, considering that the story's about a detective, then I'll take that as a compliment.
Luna also 'had her ways.'
Considering how mad he was... he has his ways of putting the fear of God in people 😉
Did anyone else think he was going to scream "German science is the the world's finest!"?
I’m surprised the doctor didn’t yell out mien snitzel!
Also we gonna gloss over the fact that sunsets doctor is a nazi?
11058616
That's a matter of debate. Lol
11058823
I didn't see that coming either. And HOW is he still alive?! When is this?
11061391
Uh... the Warp did it?
11061397
What?!
11061450
What?
11061451
Please don't sidetrack, you literally said the warp is responsible? Is this another Secret Nazi Project that comes out of no where, and make it sound like another cliche detective show plot point that the writers pulled out of their ass!? ( No Offense, this literally happens sometimes. ).
11061458
No. It was a joke from reading a lot of Warhammer stories.
There are certain things in the story that will make sense in time. Seeing as I'm not the best writer, it'll take a while for me to explain. Until then, you may build up your own theories.
Muy buena historia, todo transcurre como debe, la continuidad y el como llevas a los personajes es increÃble, es intrigante el como continuará y como se solucionará, quedo a la espera del siguiente capÃtulo.
11100611
Gracias. Eso significa mucho para mÃ. Pido disculpas de antemano por no tener más capÃtulos, ya que he estado ocupado con la vida. Nuevamente, gracias por leer. (Traducido por Google Translate)