Sunset starts off her day just like any other. Wake up cursing the sun, nearly dying on the stairs, and worrying about how she's totally gonna confess her love to her best friend today. Totally. Unfortunately, what started off as a pretty normal crappy morning quickly begins to come apart when a certain cute variable gets thrown into the mix. Sunset will definitely deal with this in a chill and relaxed manner, like everything she does. Probably. Maybe. Hopefully.
Edit: On the Featured Box from June 17th-21st! Thank you all so much!
Read the sequel here!
is it Monday?
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It's a Saturday that feels like a Monday. Because sometimes, life just be like that.
Just 'YANK' the door open
oh...........
Fun, cute, adorable, and well written. I enjoyed this.
Well, since you ask, I think you did good.
My face right now:
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Thank you both very much! This story was a pretty big leap of style for me, as a normally deal in long, serious stories. I'm glad you both enjoyed it!
Good Gaia, Sunset, you are such a magnificent disaster. But, you got your cute purple nerd in the end, so let's just call it a win.
This is a super sweet story. I keep seeing it next to mine in featured and got curious. I loved it and kinda wish there was more haha. Plus totally not at all worked up chill sunset is awesome lmao.
LMFAO
Cute!
How cute! I actually would love a prequel where it's just Twilight babbling to TImber about how amazing Sunset is and Timber trying to explain to Twilight that she's probably a lesbian, hahaha. I can see it now.
[SCENE: Twilight's bedroom]
Timber: Wow, you have a lot of pictures of Sunset Shimmer in here
Twilight: Yes, and all my other friends too. This is my favorite one, it's all of us from the last school dance!
Timber: Yeah, but...have you noticed that Sunset is in basically all of them? That dance picture doesn't have Rarity or Pinkie Pie in it. And this one of you guys on a camping trip doesn't have Applejack in it, even though I know she must have been there since you guys do everything together. But Sunset is in all of them.
Twilight: Oh, huh...never noticed.
Timber: Yeah...so why is that pic your favorite?
Twilight: I just think my friends all look really pretty in that one. Rarity outdid herself in the outfits and our hairstyles. And she gave Sunset a suit, see, and she looked so good! I didn't realize girls could look so good in suits! Girls should wear suits more often.
Timber: mmhm...would you ever wear a suit?
Twilight: Oh, no, I don't think I can pull it off. But like, Sunset can pull any style off. She has this cool rocker-badgirl style but she looks good in anything! Frilly dresses, suits, pants, even just wearing a dirty shirt and shorts she looks good!
Timber: Right...you know, I did wonder at first why your parents let me up into your room with you, alone, with no supervision, but I think I'm starting to understand...
Twilight: Huh? What's that to understand? They just trust us like the two almost-adults we are.
Timber: .............sure.......
Actually...now that I've written that out...I kinda want to write this....
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Ha, that's definitely funny. If you want to, go ahead. I was thinking that maybe I could write some more following this, but if it has inspired you to do your own fic, by all means.
(Though I actually headcanon SciTwi as bi.)
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That is a very believable scenario.
Really good story. Sunset and Sci-Twi are a cute ship.
The beginning of it where it shows Sunset not being a morning person was expressed through some real good description of the morning sunlight attacking her eyes.
Good story and I do love me my SunLight stories (Especially Sci-Twi x Sunset) I just have 1 noticable question to this...
It starts off with Sunset talking about wanting to confess to Twilight and later we learn that she didn't even know Twilight and Timber broke up.
Was she planning to steal Twilight from Timber, make it a triangle relationship, or was hoping to be rejected to get over her love for Twilight? 🤔
I say this from a writer's standpoint, all-in-all a cute oneshot story. ❤x💜
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It was more like an exasperated sentiment. She never thought she had a chance, so it didn't matter either way to her. "Get it off my chest" sorta thing.
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Got it. 👍 Well, wishing you the best of luck with any possible new stories you might make. (And if they are Sunset x Twilight stories you might see me pop up again.)
I do love these absolute dorks. (And yeah, turns out the girl named Sunset isn’t morning person. Go figure.) Lovely fluff. On to the sequel!
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I always loved the gag in Equestria Girls that Sunset wakes up very angry and very confused. As someone who typically wakes up at noon, I really vibe with her.
This is absolutely adorable and delightfully gay. Great work! <3
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Happy to hear you enjoyed it! "Delightfully Gay" was definitely the intended vibe.
Talk about a not so great way to start her day.
Talk about embarrassing.
Poor Twilight.
A sign of what's coming next.
Knew it!
Just what i was waiting for!
onto the floor and laid*
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Ha, it sounds like you enjoyed reading. Or at least I hope you did. Either way, thank you for your enthusiastic play-by-play reactions, they're more or less what I was aiming for.
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Oh course I loved it. Your talking to a sciset fan/former sciset fanfict writer!
Damn, I thought laying your head on someone's shoulder was a normal thing. Me and my friend do it all the time to each other.
HOW IS TWILIGHT SO CALM ABOUT THIS–
(I CANNOT THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR REKINDLING MY LOVE FOR SCISET AFTER I THOUGHT I STARTED TO GET OVER IT)