After a drug batch goes disastrously wrong, Levi Cronell and his honorary brother Alan Sizemore somehow end up in Equestria after humans being absent there for many, many moons. While seperated, the two try to reunite while simultaneously trying to settle in and find there place In this chaotic world. At the same time, they attempt to grapple with powers none of them can understand, leaving many questions unanswered. Will they ever find each other? Or will they become victims of the unknown world around them?
That is awesome
What do you mean by that?
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Meth
Nice pay day two reference
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Seriously what do you mean by that, srry that my stupid cant think of a coherent answer
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The failed cook part? If so it's meth.
looks fun
Alot of big words 🤪
Too damn forgiving
Dudes letting way too much just roll off his chest... kinda hard to get into his character when it seems like he has no concept of anger
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Yeah, I can see that. But there are probably some people in life who would be that quick to forgive. Hope this doesn't drive you completely away. He gets pretty angry soon enough, he knows the concept of anger very well. :)
I just realized this ENTIRE TIME I've been spelling the masculine form of brunette wrong. I think it's about time I retire from writing. It was fun while it lasted.
Is this a crossover?
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No. Why do you ask? Gary's an original character, by the way.
This story is confusing me?
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What's confusing about it?
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Words too big ingrish hard😩
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I get that. I need to chill on some of the big ass words lmao. Your ingrish is gonna be okay, I promise.
It's hard to follow the story with all that exposition you're adding in but interesting nonetheless.
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Can you point out some of the exposition I've added so I know what to tone down on? I appreciate the critique I'm always looking to improve.
Simply put it's hard when I'm getting normal dialogue from the characters in the story and then getting a full-on documentary description of the environment/situation like a crime Novel. it's not that I don't appreciate it or don't like it it's hard to follow like what is the third person view and person A and B conversation gets lost in you translation. But that's just my constructive criticism.