Contest Entry for the "Dialogue Only Contest"
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Luna is worried about falling to darkness again and Celestia suggests retiring.
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Story takes places before and during Season 9 Episode 1 and includes dialogue from the episode painsteakinly edited. Sex tag added for a single comment that might be perceived as lewd.
Liked the story and the jokes, e.g. Autumn.
Parts of that seem awkward for imagining Celestia saying it, not sure if the phrasing of "borderline on crazy" is intentional
Also, statically -> statistically, unless you mean it's something that doesn't change
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Fixed, and thank you for commenting.
Rainbow must have said this but then who said this?
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Also Rainbow.