Star Gazer can't get a break. He's always stressed out by his constant studies. But his greatest stress of all come from mares: he turns into a quivering mess around them. Yet he still spends a large amount of the time in the Ponyville Library studying various books. It just so happens he's there one day when Twilight is testing out a new spell. However, things don't go as planned and now Star has to deal with the consequences: a longer mane and eyelashes are going to be the least of his worries.
*Special Thanks to Magic Bolt for the amazing cover art!*
I tracked . Keep up the good work
This requires a track please continue!
I just have to laugh at the spa mares from hell.
O_O
Twilight's a stallion now. This story is becoming more and more crazy every chapter...
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oh I'm such an evil writer
Question: Does FIMfiction have pre-readers?
This story seems intriguing eough. Consider this as an announcement of me checking the "tracking" box.
But yes, FIMfiction has pre-readers. Hopefully you'll find some willing to help you. I didn't notice many spelling or grammar errors though, so you got a good foundation in that regard. However, I myself sometimes struggle with grammar, so take my observation with a grain of salt.
"Well you're definitely passing the speed test with flying colors!"
I see what you did there
Oh jeez, Loved the ending!
This... wow.
I don't think it would be fair to ask you to write a sequel, but I would like to see more of this OC!
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Well I really did regret never fully explaining Star's cutie mark in-story. It would have been way too bulky and expositiony, if only there were a way to explain its back story
That was an amazing ending! Thank you for writing this!
-WG
I loved this! Why did I just find this story now?! Favorited!
You troll. Genderbending with the anomorphic spell? :D
This is a great story! I hope someday you write a slice-of-life style story of all the hijinks that Star Gazer gets into with his... predicament.
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Eh I've got to finish Reality Break first. Plus, I just found this awesome anime, I'm getting a really weird sense of dejavu though
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Trolling really can be fun sometimes
368082 dang broken image.
I'm going out on a limb and guessing it's Ranma or To Love Ru.
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looks fine to me but yeah definitely Ranma... and probably some of To-Love-ru as well (that one ova ) Oh I am a cruel author
368146 I haven't seen a successful Ranma crossover yet, and I don't think there is a To Love Ru crossover except for the reference in your fic. (there is one r\Ranma crossover, but I think it has too many flaws to be enjoyable)
After Reality Break I want to see some crazy anime crossovers >:D
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just waiting for some reviews on this one (not Cloudy Stars) but...
ya read one piece?
368202 short answer: no
my answer in a few minutes: yes
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A psychological issue rather than an actual one, if you'll recall a certain purple unicorn managed to defeat a Dark Lord of Chaos yet still probably had a greater breakdown over being late on a fricking letter
Aww this story is cute.
Dat ending!
Downloaded this to my tablet last night, and went through it this afternoon. It was a very enjoyable read. I'm glad to see that you have a sort of sequel fic going, as well. I hope it'll be as enjoyable as this was.
So every time he sneezes he goes form a stallion to a mare and vise-versa.
That is exactly like a manga I read a while back.
R63?
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Oh shit! Get him away get him away!
2457259 Well that's a little mean Don'tcha think? He's just minding his own business.
YES! I love genderbending stories!
Status: Faved.
Reason: Awesomeness.
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これはよんでたのしかった。ありがとうございました!
This was a fun read. Thank you!
I want to read this, but the cancelled sequel gives me some concern. The epilogue does wrap everything up with adequate closure, yes? If I start reading this I want to be sure I won't be left hanging.
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I was wondering if you were going to show up
"What do you… no… just no, I already lost my outer masculinity! I am not losing any more by going to that boutique!"
oh the indignity
Dang, and I was almost betting that Celestia WAS Starswirl. It would be a good reason then for the curse 'By Celestia's Beard.'
419369 oh hay it's you. I would ask if you're stalking me but by the timestamp I'm stalking you. Hi! I can't remember if we have spoken before but I see you on a lot of the stories I read.
Huh, I read this like 200 weeks ago, but I can barely remember any of it... maybe I should reread it at some point? Seeing as I gave it an upvote, it might be worth it, heh.
Maybe slur, probably just a typo
I made an account just to give this story a like!
going to downvote because you mess with my great and powerful waifu