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Makitk

Makitk Joined 16th Feb, 2013 · Offline

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  • Wednesday
    The return to Josey

    And thus begins Josey's second part.

    I'm sick in bed, so excuse me if I made mistakes in this new chapter. I'm sure you'll comment on it if you find them. I'll fix them when I feel better again.

    Also, that other site is giving me grief so if you're waiting for an update there tell them to stop booting my session all the time.

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  • Monday
    April done.

    So that was the last chapter for April.
    The last few chapters of her story didn't quite want to roll out as fast as I wanted them to, and led to an unsatisfactory conclusion in my opinion.
    Fortunately there's Josey's next chapter already half-finished on drive to look forward to. I'll post it as soon as it's done.

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  • 1 week
    tableflip

    Chapter doesn't want.
    Words don't sentence.
    Make story zoom? No.
    Try again later.
    :raritydespair:

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  • 2 weeks
    Halfway point.

    Okay, today's chapter update puts us at the halfway point for April's story.
    I've got 12 chapters in the works for her, as I did for Josey and Spritelight before her.

    Next stop; Yellowstone. :pinkiehappy:

    (Also, yes; I am writing them as I update them... I have depleted my buffer. :twilightsheepish: )

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  • 2 weeks
    Daily updates so far.

    I've been on a roll with regards to Spritelight this week, so I've been pushing updates for it every day so far.

    I hope to return to Pearl's Travels 2, Windcatcher, and eventually Fuu sometime soon as well, but I finally have the feel for Spritelight's continued story and need to get it onto digital paper while I do.

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Jul
15th
2017

Small edits... · 10:22am Jul 15th, 2017

A friend just got into reading KAPT, and noticed some issues with it...

Apparently I had started describing Pearl with a grey coat, due to her attempt to get close to a mother-of-pearl tone, only to then describe her as a green pony in later chapters...
So that's fixed.

There were a few spelling errors and some grammar she pointed out, so those are fixed...

...and I'm still without a proper (p)reviewer/editor who could have saved me this embarrassing moment. :twilightsheepish:

Report Makitk · 302 views · Story: Pearl's Travels 1: Hollow Shades · #Edits
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