So! There we have it! Six years and one month down the line, it’s finished. I honestly never thought this day would come, and I certainly never thought that people would have still been interested in what I was putting out after so long away from this site. From the very bottom of my heart I thank each and every one of you who have stuck with this and come back to it after everything.
There are too many people who have helped out in a more direct manner for this story, editor, people who came up with the basis for some of the characters, and I am struggling to remember names, so in the interest of fairness, I will put out a blanket thank you to everyone who helped shift this unwieldy behemoth over the finish line.
Technically, I did once have a plan for this to be a trilogy, but at the moment I don’t know if I can properly get a third story written and do it justice. I will be having a serious think over the next few weeks about it, but if you would be interested in the final instalment, then let me know, we’ll see where the world takes us all.
So again, to everyone, thank you.
Fenrisianbrony
I would most certainly be interested in seeing where you take this next. I also have to say that I share your disbelief that this story is finished. Swooping Pegasus was somewhere around the third story I read on this site, this series has literally been with me since I started watching the show, to see it draw to a conclusion feels unreal.
It was a long time, but worth it, every minute, every word and every emotion ^^.
I have to thank you and everyone who helped you in this for making this story.
I would be happy to read a third one, but if you think you can't write something you would be happy with in this universe you shouldn't force yourself.
Maybe you need a break, maybe you need to write something different, maybe you just start writing to get back in the groove (I can say it helps me most of the time to just start something and then keep going. ;P) sometimes the hardest part is just the start ^^.
But what ever you do, I thank you for the time and fun I had thanks to the story and I hope you had fun writing it.
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Well I am very glad you liked it enough for it to stand out :D
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Stand out barely does it justice. Swooping Pegasus and Decent into Madness are the first entries on my favourites. This is one of three 40k crossover series on this site that have had me absolutely hooked since I discovered them.
Warhammer ~~
I'm interested in seeing where the possible third one goes.
Wow, I can't believe we made it here! I loved this series, and definitely want to thank you for your hard work. If this is the end I understand, but I would always be interested in another chapter. Bravo
I've been following the series since the beginning. It was beautiful, it was tragic, but most of all it was exciting.
It's good that this part is finally done. The Dark Eldar are always hard to read about, especially when one of the ponies stuffers because of their horrible nature, but it is what it is.
I for one hope we can get to read the third installment. I don't know what you have planned, but since Craftworlds and Dark Eldar have already been explored, the ones missing are either the Ynnari (assuming they exist in this continuity), the Exodites or the Corsairs.
Fluttershy would fit the mold of the Exodites, Rarity surprisingly would fit well with the Corsairs and Twilight would do well with the Ynnari, but that is just my imagination.
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There is also the craftworld ship that exists outside of the known galaxy and travels through the void, entering the galaxy every 300 years when it’s route takes it through the calixis sector, but they are self exiles who left the galaxy as a whole as they believed peace was the answer as opposed to conflict. (Though they constantly have to contend with Rak’gol, Chaos forces, the cult of sollex, as well as Ork Freebooters during it’s short time within the calixis sector.
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Ohh, or the Black Library within the Webway, Craftworld only open to Harlequins and one Inquisitor.
I do want to see more on this idea and i do hop you make sequel to this story
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Am starting to go back through and fix them/remove them
Hey, so, add one more to the "trilogy" votes. I've definitely been a fan for a while.
Wow ..
What a journey. I've been following Swooping Pegasus and Descent into Madness. Their the best 40k crossovers in this site. Your story is what got me addicted to 40k in the first place. I never thought youd finish this story tbh..
I would be overjoyed to read a third installment but if you feel as though you can't write it right now, I belive you should take a break an write something else maybe. Whatever the case, best wishes
You know, I would like to think my endless pestering is what got you to finally finish this FenrisianBrony .
As such I will now pester everyone here who reads these comments about a warhammer 30K alternate universe you have been told about before, The Legions Reborn. If you haven't had enough of FenrisianBrony's stuff go to the flowing links:
https://thelegionsreborn.fandom.com/wiki/The_Legions_Reborn_Wiki
https://www.facebook.com/pg/TheLegionsReborn/posts/?ref=page_internal
Won't have any ponies for you but we will eventually have centaurs... kinda
Regardless He, I and 14 other writers post new stuff every week and we would love more people to see it.
If you just want FenrisianBrony's stuff just go to the wiki and look for everything that involves either the Star Guardians or the Palatine Wings.
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I'm assuming this is the Blight Wardens writer XD
But Dark One is correct, this has been what I've spent a good...who knows how long perfecting XD
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You are correct, didn't want to shamelessly plug my own legion in there as well. But now you forced my hand .
If you want to read on our AU's Nurgle legion just look at the Blight Wardens on the wiki. Really hoping to do Nurgle proper justice with them.
I'm glad I stuck it out with this story. It's been one hell of a ride. It might not be the "happy ending" that Dash, or AJ, or the rest of Equestria wanted...but happy endings went out the window the moment RD threw her lot in with Comorragh.
Bravo, good sir!
I love the story, Id read the 3rd installment, but Im also willing to wait, even if its years down the line. Your stories are one of the few that really stood out to me when I first started reading here and while in the end it is your decision, I would encourage to think about part 3, not now but in the foreseeable;e future :3
Thank you for finishing this story. I am interested in another installment, however, don't force yourself. Whatever will be, will be.
It was hinted in the chapter at the party that the elements were going to interact with the crying rainbow.
Was it planned for rainbow to be hit with a harmony beam? I am surprised that didn't happen. It just seems like an easy solution to rainbows malfunctioning body. It prolly can't fix her mind but itd be easy to revert her claws and wings at least.
Also a 3rd installment would be a nice read but I think this old horse just needs a proper burial. This ending feels a little lackluster. Like not nearly enough peices that could have been used were used.
Why would Celestia and Luna allow rainbow to rot away in the woods. Why wouldnt they blast her with harmony. It would ether fix some of her or turn her to stone. I imagine a half fixed rainbow living in the woods, eating manticores and acting like a fucked up yoda
I'd also read a third, thanks for finishing the 2nd.
I loved following all your stories mate each one is fantastic in their own ways always keen for more but of course it's your decision in the end. Will be here for more editing as well 😊
I'm all for a third installment.
It was a fun ride w/ you. I hope there is a part 3, but I won't force the issue. If any of my characters show up again, pm me so I can help w/ the writing. Have a good one.
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Oh I feel sorry for the Tau if they really think they can enslave Applejack.
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Don't get me wrong, I will finish reading this story. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye. It just may take a little longer to. I mean I am probably a bigger fan of Best Pony than Best Pony is. Or at least Scootaloo's level of a fan
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XD
Well, I hope you enjoy it :D
Please please please make the 3rd story! I got a couple of my friends to start read Swooping and I'm sure they will enjoy it as much as me. So you should definitely make the 3rd story. *launches the tactical Cute missiles*
I enjoy every chapter of this story particularly the tau part you have equal representations as in while overall good they have bad parts. I just wish gw followed how you portrayed them.