Star Tracker made the right choice of defending Twilight from Iron Will. So Twilight decides to give him something she never did to anypony.
Special thanks to MoJoK20X for editing this
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Star Tracker made the right choice of defending Twilight from Iron Will. So Twilight decides to give him something she never did to anypony.
Special thanks to MoJoK20X for editing this
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/221451/MoJoK20X
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Interesting idea, not bad execution either. I'd suggest that you think harder about it next time, and try to delve a little deeper into it: this felt rushed. Alternatively, this felt very bite-sized, so the rushing might not have been so bad, aside from the fact that it feels a bit unfocused.
Anyway, those are my thoughts.
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Sorry after watching the episode, I thought of an idea and after that the sequels will be more focussed.
What exactly did DAMN HAMSTER wrote on that deleted comment? Just curious.
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Nice! The troll got trolled.
This story was a bite sized episode aftermath. Something to read to pass the time.
Still needs some edits as I still spotted a couple of errors.
This is my favourite story :)
My man scored.
Haha I like it