Lost, But Not Forgotten

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Lost, But Not Forgotten

The idea for this story existed before the episode where we see Scootaloo's parents, so I decided to write it anyway.

Chapters (3)

Lost but Not Forgotten · 1st Sep 2020 · 869 words
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A Tumble Down Memory Lane · 1st Sep 2020 · 388 words
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Flight. · 1st Sep 2020 · 209 words
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TheAncientPolitzanian

TheAncientPolitzanian #1 · Sep 1st, 2020 · 1 · · Flight. ·

I liked this. Kudos!
:)

Wheezyandbreezy

Wheezyandbreezy #2 · Sep 1st, 2020 · 1 · · Flight. ·

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Thank you.

Gadgetphile

Gadgetphile #3 · Sep 1st, 2020 · 1 · 2 · Flight. ·

Stories like this is the reason there's an "Alternate universe" tag. What's your reason for not using it?

Wheezyandbreezy

Wheezyandbreezy #4 · Sep 1st, 2020 · 3 · · Flight. ·

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Because that would require me to pull my head out of my arse. Thank you

RaylanKrios

RaylanKrios #5 · Dec 5th, 2020 · · · Flight. ·

This is soo close to being a good story, some more exposition especially in chapters 2 and 3, more letting the readers know the immediate aftermath from the accident and you'd have something, but as for now its not developed enough to be a coherent narrative

Wheezyandbreezy

Wheezyandbreezy #6 · Dec 29th, 2020 · · · Flight. ·

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The original concept was for a comic so it doesn't necessarily translate well to narrative story. Thank you for the comment and constructive criticism though!

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