The experiment that Twilight, Applejack and Rarity are performing at the mall is interrupted by the arrival of magically imbued items from Equestria. The hunt for them will wind up answering the question they set out to solve.
Story premise and collaboration by JBlaser.
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Nice work! I think you could improve how applejack talks a little. Btw thats advice from a southerner. Y’all want some lessons on how to sound country, just lemme know. Anyhow improve how applejack talks and ya got yer self a perfect story. You nailed twilight and Rarity however. So 7/10 story.
Yes, I usually have fun writing out Applejack's vocabulary phonetically, (see boundaries) but I toned it down this time.
Can you make a sequel for story with more transformation.
So how long till twilight have her hearings back?