After his defeat King Sombra is revived by an unsuspecting crystal pony named Skittish. Finding himself free once again, the dark king seeks out powerful allies to bring his foes to to their knees.
loosely based off original idea by, and used with the express permission of, Ponynumber14346, trent on mlpforums, any deviation from his story is just my own artistic license. cover art by Winry-Hasawrench on DA.
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That was really good, I like Skittish, my reaction probably would have been the same. Also there was one tiny error i found in the first paragraph "...which was actually was even more menacing..." I'm looking forward to more of this story!
I too am looking forward for more of this story...if your inspiration allows us the luck
2518415 Well finals week is coming up so no brainstorming till all tests are complete, but after that I've got all the time in the world.
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Sounds good oh and good luck...
Also if you are one of those that can get ideas from anything, keep a notebook handy just in case the muse of inspiration pays you a visit
2520741 Ah, but such is my curse. For even when I grow tiresome and abandon an endeavor, the cruel mistress that is my muse hounds me into the dark pit of despair and self loathing.
Very nice I like how you pulled in the IDW comic series.
The destroyer of emotion and the army that feeds on it. This is gonna get interesting real soon. 
Just some minor errors I spotted:
"something has drained the LIVE (life) from them."
"as thick as a PONIES (pony's) hoof"
"King Sombra looked to see the princess Cadence flying past with his query in her possession."
I believe you mean "Quarry", since a "Query" is a question or inquiry.
2637771 Thanks for the spell check, I'll see that it's fixed.
I absolutely love Skittish. Also I love the way you described the Changelings.
I wish I was as good as you at using adjectives and other describing words...my writing is extremely plain. But Changeling Jelly?
I hope it isn't made like regular honey 
2659240My My secret, thesaurus.com.
It also helps to be a little crazy with your brain storming, I talk to myself when I drive to work.
2659574 You have no idea what talking to youself is I spent 4 hours muttering to myself while typing Queen Chrysalis' Plan. The most amount of time total though is probably 2 days straight.
Ya update! love the story, can't wait to see how they're gonna rope in nightmare moon.
2724580Glad you're enjoying yourself.
I'll try not to disappoint.
Very minor errors in this chapter:
and
oh and I forgot to say this last chapter, but I like the whole Chrysalis is like a Siren in the sense that she made Skittish forget that she is just a mutant bug monster.
2843748 Thanks for the spell cheks.
About Chrysalis I felt that a little myth blending wouldn't hurt seeing on how the FIM team took a few liberties with the changelings in the first place.
I liked this chapter and I had almost forgotten about this story! My favorite part from this update:
Work*
I know it ins't talking about Hayseed Turniptruck, but that is who I thought of first... have you read the Rarity micro series? He gets his own 2 page story and he is now a favorite background pony of mine!
You go a little something there...
bore*
Oh my I didn't even know one could raze a body part... unless you meant raise
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
3324481I don't think its that good, plus I don't release often enough for any onr to put up with me
"come on", I'm guessing this one could've been bad autocorrect? Interesting story, have not found enough well fitting villain team-ups on this site
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