Skoruligr the Dovahkiin is bored, He's learned every shout there is, but when he starts to make his own shout he and his Khajiit companion J'zargo are in for an adventure they never could have anticipated... My first fanfic so constructive criticism is appreciated. Some blood and fight scenes but most if not all blood will be shed by the Tamrielians, If it starts getting dark I'll add the tag but for now I will try to keep it mainly light-hearted.
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Very interesting. Also, AWESOME! This is just what I was looking for in a Skyrim/MLP crossover.
I like your Dovahkiin. He's a very love-able character (Funny, sarcastic and head-strong)... so far. Who knows what can happen in the magical land of Equestria?
Anyway, a great chapter and a great start for a potentially great story.
228506 Thanks! I'll try to keep him consistent.
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I vote Skoruligr Ulfrsson as the Dovahkiin of the Year (DotY), if such a thing existed.
I prefer Third-Person with First-Person at certain parts, but write what you feel most comfortable with. Anyway, great job (As always, it seems). Keep it up!
=)
Fus Ro Yay?
Awsome!
love it make more
"Pretty pleeease?"
282361 almost there.
POV!!! We need another chap! Also this dragonborn is THE BEST. EVERY SHOUT? I wish I was him!
Now to the track! FUS RO DAH! GODSPEED AND GOOODDD LUUUCCCKKKK!
I really liked this chapter!
It was good to see some bloody good action! That's what skyrim is all about. Nice refrence of all of the quests! 
I hope for the next! Godspeed and godluck!
Ysmir.
Skoruligr: "J'zargo, grab my beard!"
*J'zargo tugs at Skoruligr's beard*
Skoruligr: ADVENTURE!
This is exactly what came to mind when you ended with 'Adventure!'.
Im in woodshop. My wood is mahogany, but it wasn't 300 feet tall, nor did it breath fire...
317663 Haha, I work in a woodshop too, I make memorial boxes and whatnot. Ever since I saw that episode of DBZ parody I have wanted to make a mahogany desk when no one was around.
Love the chapter and I enjoyed the DBZ abridged input. Keep goin and stay golden^^
Looks pretty fuckin shweet.
319977 Thanks! Your story, "A Dragonborn, Destiny, and Very Small Horses" is what made me want to make a Skyrim/MLP crossover.
319995 <3
LOL This story is so funny.
Sweeeet... Nice goin'
Good... Eez good...
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Sorry it was necessary
Not bad
when is this story updated? just curious to know when i get my fix (as in, is it updated daily, bi-daily, weekly etc.) not to be imposing or anything, i know how much deadlines suck
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427906 I haven't been getting much time write, but a new chapter should hopefully be up in 2-3 days. I post chapters when they are done pretty much, my busy life doesn't allow me to set deadlines but I try to get them out soon as possible without sacrificing quality.
nice story, liked, favorited, moustached
one piece of constructive criticism though, you should remove "(Exiting Skoruligr’s POV for a moment)", reading it slightly broke the flow, and I think we all would have been able to guess that the POV shifted to 3rd person just by reading after seeing the little lines, I know it sounds petty but just trying to help
Hmm... Interesting. I'll keep an eye on this story.
428040 It's been six weeks dude :/
643421 I know, Everything I've written so far I haven't considered good enough. Not that I've written much, hopefully I'll be able to actually write something good in the near future.
Pinkie broke the 4th wall with that lv25 joke
When are you going to update!? This is a very good story, plus the fact that if you can handle Sheogorath you could easily handle the God of Chaos or anything for that matter.
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"Yes, let us find where we are and get back to Skyrim. After that J’zargo will burn down your house"
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It's nice to see writers now days asking for input from the readers. I say continue with the story, there are many readers out there with ideas that could make any story legendary. Also, once season three hits, i'm sure the MLP fandom will pick up once more. Keep goin and stay golden^^
story is good.
I liked it the way it went.
keep writing it, it was rather entertaining
Pretty good story, not the best, by far (No offense, but for the past 2 months I've had my favorites box cluttered by at least 900 updates of featured stories, so I have high standards), but still good. In terms of originality, I think you could add a lot of new things, but you should re write how they got to Equestria though. That need an original idea. (oh! oh! Use Dwemmer ruins, or maybe by successfully killing the adoring fan (Asumming he's been made immortal or something, and Akatosh submitted a sort of 'Divine Bounty', then after killing him, the killer gets automatically sent somewhere that equates to heaven (Ie:Equestria))
Also, maybe have it not be Discord. Or maybe making it so that Discord is actually protecting the ponies from some greater evil. Like Jygalag. Or cheese.
"MY GOD, IT'S ANOTHER CHEESE ATRANOCH, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!" Shouted a mare running hysterically, as the Dovahkiin stepped up, and prepared to take out the commander of Delectible Delights (The army).
1454613 Good suggestions, I probably will re-write how they got there. However I think someone has already wrote a story where Discord is the lesser evil trying spare ponies from the greater evil.
1454338>>1454348>>1454514 Thank you for the encouragement.
In the end, it doesn't matter whether the idea is original or not. If it has a bad execution, the entire story becomes shit! Having an original idea is just the icing on the cake.
Take a look at "Hands", by Andrew Joshua Talon. HiE, an incredibly generic and stale idea, and yet... Why is it so popular and one of my favorite stories here?
It's all about the execution. How is the idea, in the end, implemented? Are the characters deep? Is the humor/romance humorous/romantic? Does the story succeed in actually telling a story?
In "A tale of Dragonborn and colorful ponies"... yeah. It succeeded, in my opinion, in being one of the better Skyrim crossovers out there. I mean, I didn't see ALL of them, but I really liked Skoruligr and his faithful (?) companion, J'zargo!
...Now, if only you updated more often, huh?
MOAR J'ZARGO!
Jzargo seems to have good lines, but seems a bit unwritten.
He should have some development or at least a few POV's. And kill Diamond tiara. J'zargo is the best character and should be in The Elder Scrolls VI: Elswyr.
What if, instead of trying to save the world he went and took over it instead?
MORE!
I say its good, not perfect but I have never read a story I thought was perfect so don't take it personally its not you its me. Anyway I think you should continue the fic and finished it. It good and you should finished it.
We need some DovaSpike action!
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