Sex is a part of life--even the life of our kind and gentle ponies. This is a collection of stories that use sex as a storytelling tool, not just cheap gratification.
He moved over to her foal and nuzzled her tiny cheek, eliciting a small happy squeak before she went back to nursing.
Consider where the foal is at that point. So, he pretty much just pushed his face in between his daughter's spread legs.
Hawkward!!
This really is heart-breaking little short, though. Derpy is the victim of naïveté and less than stellar parenting and fails to realise how big of a thing sex can be.
The one saving grace is that we already know Derpy is a stellar and loving parent, and its this knowledge that makes the moral and title ring true.
I've always seen Derpy as a fiercely protective and loving mother, so it seemed like a natural fit in the story. I don't know if you've read any of my other stories, but there are two more I wrote about Derpy being a loving mother (Hearth's Warming Ever, and to a lesser extent, Relaxing on a Cloud). I've been strongly considering using this story as a starting point for a longer fic about Derpy raising a foal alone (it would probably start when she got kicked out of the house).
It's always been my style to leave a few things open for consideration in my stories.
With that thought in mind:
Consider where the foal is at that point
I assure you, I did. I imagined him leaning over the bed from her belly side (since she's lying on her side), as that would be the side he would have been on anyway to talk to her. Admittedly, from a modern western modesty standpoint, it probably would be a bit much to kiss or nuzzle a baby while it was nursing. But, let me ask you a question in response: considering that Equestria is a normally nude society, what differences might there be in social rules of modesty compared to Earth? We will presume that ponies are roughly the same anatomically as horses (or ponies) on Earth.
2728800 oh hey! Fancy finding this! Though it's not actually that spoilerish since things haven't happened yet, it's interesting to see the precursor idea.
Here's hoping that Derpy's mom eventually came around.
Her attitude reminds me of a very talented creator on DA that has several AUs on the M6 and other characters. They are very detailed and emotionally poignant. In the one about Twilight, Her family has a history dating back at least 3 generations (if not farther). Sadly part of that history involves very strict and controlling parents. Twilight's mom (here known as Velvet Sparkle) DEMANDED excellence, and OBEDIENCE. Let me tell you that her reaction when she found out that Twilight had found love in PONYVILLE of all places she was not pleased, particularly when that love turned out to be a FEMALE PEGASUS of all things. Suffice to say that it took many years to repair the damage done.
This AU in part strove to explain Twilight's tendency to freak out when things didn't 100% go to plan, when she did less than PERFECT on an assignment (real or perceived) and her near idolization of Princess Celestia.
That was so beautiful!!!!
( starts to cry like a man baby)
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Thank you!
Consider where the foal is at that point. So, he pretty much just pushed his face in between his daughter's spread legs.
Hawkward!!
This really is heart-breaking little short, though. Derpy is the victim of naïveté and less than stellar parenting and fails to realise how big of a thing sex can be.
The one saving grace is that we already know Derpy is a stellar and loving parent, and its this knowledge that makes the moral and title ring true.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
I've always seen Derpy as a fiercely protective and loving mother, so it seemed like a natural fit in the story. I don't know if you've read any of my other stories, but there are two more I wrote about Derpy being a loving mother (Hearth's Warming Ever, and to a lesser extent, Relaxing on a Cloud). I've been strongly considering using this story as a starting point for a longer fic about Derpy raising a foal alone (it would probably start when she got kicked out of the house).
It's always been my style to leave a few things open for consideration in my stories.
With that thought in mind:
I assure you, I did. I imagined him leaning over the bed from her belly side (since she's lying on her side), as that would be the side he would have been on anyway to talk to her. Admittedly, from a modern western modesty standpoint, it probably would be a bit much to kiss or nuzzle a baby while it was nursing. But, let me ask you a question in response: considering that Equestria is a normally nude society, what differences might there be in social rules of modesty compared to Earth? We will presume that ponies are roughly the same anatomically as horses (or ponies) on Earth.
That was............deep.
Like, real deep.
Now I'm welling up. Haven't done that in a while...
In short, loved it. I hope you do use this as a start to your aforementioned fic. A lot of potential.
Deep shit man, deeeeeeeeeeep shit.
2696714 Manly tears were shed
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Fantastic story!
2728800 oh hey! Fancy finding this!
Though it's not actually that spoilerish since things haven't happened yet, it's interesting to see the precursor idea.
Here's hoping that Derpy's mom eventually came around.
Her attitude reminds me of a very talented creator on DA that has several AUs on the M6 and other characters. They are very detailed and emotionally poignant. In the one about Twilight, Her family has a history dating back at least 3 generations (if not farther). Sadly part of that history involves very strict and controlling parents. Twilight's mom (here known as Velvet Sparkle) DEMANDED excellence, and OBEDIENCE. Let me tell you that her reaction when she found out that Twilight had found love in PONYVILLE of all places she was not pleased, particularly when that love turned out to be a FEMALE PEGASUS of all things. Suffice to say that it took many years to repair the damage done.
This AU in part strove to explain Twilight's tendency to freak out when things didn't 100% go to plan, when she did less than PERFECT on an assignment (real or perceived) and her near idolization of Princess Celestia.