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Touch the Sky


*strokes blanket* I am a good writer. I am a good writer. I am a good writer...

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Scootaloo's desire to fly leads her to make a desperate wish on a shooting star. The next morning she wakes up- and everything has changed. Her wish has come true- but not in the way she expected. And Rainbow Dash is less than impressed by the effects of the wish on her...

But another pony in Ponyville has made the same wish, and this complicates things a whole lot more.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 38 )

for the record

Might be a bit unoriginal, but personally I haven't seen a Scootaloo/Rainbow Dash body swap fic yet.

look around more

Will wait to see where this goes before I comment more.

Ignore Changeling Drone, they're just being rude. This story is already amazing :3

Body swaps only occur on Fridays

I turned my head and Rainbow Dash was standing there, scrutinizing me with her pink eyes

Her eyes are MAGNETA not PINK

2807006 just saying she should look around more i liked in and gave advice

I find it encouraging and Trying to be so.

Oh...!

When you wish upon a star....

2807439 Shall change immediately. I do know that, my head just wasn't working properly...:rainbowwild:

Like where this Going so looking forward to next update.

Hate to say it, but Silver Spoon just being a tagalong sheep has been done. A lot.

Can't say I don't enjoy it, though.

2813790 I know... but at least she beat up DT. Right?:twilightblush:
Personally I like Silver Spoon, but only when she's a 'tag-along sheep' rather than a bully of her own choosing.

This is interesting. :twilightsmile: I'll keep reading.

This is so cool! I'm watching :)
Well, I am when I figure out how.

Who thinks there will be more complications?? Hands Up People...

just a bit strange ah didnt expect this:derpytongue2:

wow silver spoon wished she could fly:facehoof:

I think you skipped important parts dude.

3032894 Like when Rainbow first meets Scootaloo in her body.

I'll tell you others later.

3032917 I'm just in the process of reading through the story to check for missing scenes like that. I'll add them in if they're needed. Thanks for the advice:pinkiehappy:

3032946 Okay, that scene is now in Chapter 4 (Secret's Out)

... Seems to be getting darker in here...

:rainbowhuh: Diamond Tiara's a bitch, but is she really a murderer?

3034736 Whether or not it was really an accident is up to you...:pinkiehappy:

Talk about your emotional roller coaster. One minute I'm shocked at feeling sorry for Silver Spoon, the next not-so-shocked to see her reveal her 'true colors' and being upset with her to the moment after that feeling sad at her passing. Very well written.

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Yes the gears in you head stopped working so I'm just going to have to open up your head to oil them.

Hello from 2017, I liked the twist I can't say I empathize with DT and I think the only pony who would be mad besides DT herself would be her mom, Mr. Rich doesn't strike me as the sort who would support her bullying behavior, I just assume he is ignorant or perhaps too hen-pecked by his wife to punish her. On the technicality regarding Silver's condition, perhaps if you wanted to make one tiny change you could say Silver Spoon has haemo-fillya or some other spelling pun to get around the issue. 🐎🐴👍

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