Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have been friends forever, but what happens when they want to be more than just friends? What happens when a certain cowpony gets a bit jealous? What will their elegant friend have to say about this?
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hmmm i believe this has potential i'll give it a track but consider trying to make it go longer cause 500 words is a bit short but other than that it moves kind of fast but i'll see were this goes
Really liked this, looking forward to the next part
I do like this, just please make the next chapter longer.
Cheers.
Pinkie is not going to be amused...
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
NEXT PLEASE
THIS IS GOIN GOOD SO FAR
thank you, for making the chapter longer. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep em' coming.
Cheers.
Interesting.
Interesting indeed.
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Uh... kinda... yeah its complicated
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
ouchie.....
well that bout sums up this chapter
MOAR PLEASE :D
Not bad. And you even put in my fave Ship too.. C'mon, Rarity, you can do it!
I had something to say, but I forgot and started randomly tilting my head left and right. But this chapter was interesting. I want more. More I tell you.
Thought I'd seen this somewhere before; this is on FanFiction.net isn't it?
It's a good story. Would be interested to see something more about Pinkie's reaction to RD being with Fluttershy though, seeing as she also seems to love Dash.
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Yeah its on fanfiction too. I'm actually working on a much later chapter where Pinkie does make another appearance, I've just had a lot of alternate ending ideas that I need to pick out of and a lot of school work
Yay Fluttershy understands!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
NEEDS MOAR UPDATES! NAO!
Yay! A setup!
This...this right here is pretty good. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter.
Cheers,
jangledorf
hmmmm
ITS A TRAP!!!
NOW BRING OUT FLUTTERSHY AND RAINBOW
LET THERE BE AN ALL OUT EARTH, UNICORN, AND PEGASI WAR
I dont mean to be a dick but the way this plan is working out seams pretty unrealistic. I doubt anyone would want anyhing to do with the subject of love for quite awhile in fear of more heartbreak if they just had the same experiances as rarity or applejack just did.
I have one word. Wat? No wait... That was 5! And now it's 9! Well 2 and a number... Do numbers count? If they do, I was first comment. Also... Great Story!
lool ^
keep goin
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lol thnx ill try to do my best to finish what ive started good
but just to warn you im awful at writing endings
yes...i can see where this is goin
but anyways, keep it up
MANTICORE SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!! THEY ARE ABOUT TO HAVE A ROMANTIC MOMENT!!!
Maybe it was just a prankful Rainbow? Maybe... Or maybe a giant hungry thing. And then Rainbow to the rescue.
267247 dont you mean fluttershy to the rescue?
also curse you and your cliffhangers
*slowly rises from chair* Pardon me.
*walks outside* *inhales deeply* fffffffffffffffffffffffffFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*walks back in* sorrry about that.
better short chapters then no chapters
Found this today
"Oh, another Flutterdash fic. Probably won't be that original, but cute."
Then I read it.
nice story, but i don't really like Raritys characterication, she is a drama queen, but she is a self aware one, and does come bit too uncontrolled in this fic.
Not to say that her emotions are bad ones, it's just that i would think her better at obfuscating them from others, and keeping her actions under control, afterall, out of all the mane6, she is the one who has never snapped, no matter what.
nooooooooooo
lol
hope ya do well :D
Yay an update, boo for dragon.(No offence spike)
Funny thing is, the time I was gone was when I was working on my young authors story. Cool thing is, I moved on to the state finals
Not sure this is state finals material, but I just wanted to bring that up
Yay it updated brilliant chapter by the way
:3
The story ends...
:3
GREAT STORY!!!!!
As a MASSIVE Flutterdash fan...
This is rather awsome. Your fic, although sometimes rushed and feeling in need of some TLC, is an enjoyable read.
Read 'perfect on paper' by NintendoGal55 for the more in-depth explanation on why opposites attract :)
Short answer... GENETICS!