Elegance, beauty, grace. To Rarity this is the list of qualities that a mare must have in order to attract a fine stallion. Awesomeness, coolness, radicalness. To Rainbow Dash, twentie first century colts fall head over hooves for mares with these qualities. So when a little bet is put in place to decide who's right, the results leave a certain somepony stumbled.
Now Rarity is back in school, well Dash's school of awesome that is and she will do anything to learn.
A/N; Been working on this fanfic for a while (second one ever) just needed to spruce it up first. I'm trying to add as much comedy because I'm funny in real life (just believe me >.>) but when I write I'm really serious so... yeah. And well, I don't even, what... I have no idea what I'm doing in this fic >_<
I don't even know
This idea just popped into my head and now I'm making a fanfic out of it... oh well I just hope its good enough
I went in thinking it was going to be terrible because you mispelled 'twenty' and put 'stumbled' instead of stumbling or stumped in the description, and I come out... pleasantly surprised. Not a masterpiece, but I'm certainly tracking to see where this goes.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zaV5SCLir_g
In with this before anyone else!
Couple of spelling mistakes, but you have a decent concept in my book.
Or maybe ebcause its this... who knows...
Great so far. I was so interested in the story that I didn't notice the spelling errors.
You captured their personalities well. The skyrim mention had a fourth wall degree of immersion breakage for me. Nice job catching me off guard, haha.
Huzzah, a story with Rarity and RD as the focus! Tracked.
Hah. Interesting start.
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Wow, I had no idea that even existed
And about all those spelling mistakes, sorry I can't remember when I wrote this. It was just sitting in my folder and I typed it up real quickly
Dear Celestia,
Today I found out I'm a huge tease and/ or troll by posting new chapters that aren't even a thousand words longs and being inconsistent
Yeah, it's fast right. I get it. Yeah, the chapter is only nine hundred words, short right. Promis the next chapter will be lots longer. And I still don't know what I'm doing
This is a very nice story your writing. I caught 1 or 2 spelling errors, but that's it. On comedy though I have one recommendation though it might not exactly help with this kind of story it's a start. What I did in my story was use things that my friends and I have done as comedy while also adding things that seem like something we would do. It might not be to helpful now, but hey who knows it might help in the future.
It Doesn't matter How long it is to me! It's Gonna have one of my fav shippings probably! Which is RariDash!
I WANT MOAR
Woah, did I say I'd make the next chapter a lot longer. Pffft, I meant a little longer. Okay I'm sorry, I goofed up and did't do anything for a long time
Well, I bet you know where this is going /hint/ /hint/. Also, before you ask, a mannuluswolf is a werewolf. Since the were- in werewolf comes from the latin word vere (v pronounced as w in latin) which means man, I used the latin word for pony as the prefix instead. Pretty clever move there tomColt... Eh not really
Anyway, next chapter in hopefully a week.
chapters are a bit short but let's see where this goes
This has been an interesting story so far if I do say. I like this angle of attack, so thumbs up.
One thing though, I have small question about two lines about what you are intending to say. The lines in question are
She was well aware of the ratio of mare to stallion in Equestria. That unbalanced ratio contributed to the immense amount of bisexual and homosexual mares and even some stallions.
Are you intending to say that "due to the unbalanced ratios, there is great freedom to explore same gender relationships without censure for those ponies who feel such attractions and can safely identify as homosexual or bisexual" or "due to the unbalanced ratios, a lot of ponies end up becoming bisexual or homosexual" ? Even though the the literal wording suggests the latter, it is really easy to intend the former but write it this way (I know I have one hell of a problem in my writing of skipping a step and therefore conveying an idea I do not intend).
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Yeah, sorry if I was unclear on that. I was kind of dead when writing this and I always have a clarity problem when writing.
Ugh first? Woot. On the chapter atleast...
that wasn't as satisfying as I'd hoped. Anyway. 
Fun story, post more fast Kay? And check out mine please?
Is the Movie Dash watched Twilight by any chance?
I love it