A thousand years of banishment. A thousand years of plotting, brooding, and hatred. Finally, a chance to try again.
When all that is stopped short in an instant, can bridges be mended between two immortals?
A thousand years of banishment. A thousand years of plotting, brooding, and hatred. Finally, a chance to try again.
When all that is stopped short in an instant, can bridges be mended between two immortals?
This is pretty good so far. The tone goes well with the writing, there aren't many grammatical or spelling mistakes, and it's a topic that while isn't uncommon, is still not overused. You sir/madam have won yourself a like and a favorite. It'll be interesting to see what comes next.
-Xeron
Nice. Nice flow, it feels natural.
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I had completely forgotten to mark it as complete.
Sorry to disappoint.