Luna is back on Equestria. With Nightmare Moon defeated, she just wants to continue her life on. However, they say that for one's life to be complete, you must have a love.
"What is love?" She asks herself.
In a routine night watch over, she finds a human. A very hurt human in the verge of Death.
Humans are prohibited and she knows what to do: She has to kill him.
How will Equestria take the fact that she doesn't kill him, but for both of them to enter in something entirely different to a true friendship?
Image borrowed from Devianart. (http://www.deviantart.com/art/Princess-Luna-264629770)
Chapters (8)
The grammatical errors are easily noticeable. I'm not going to give this a dislike because this story has potential. But I'm not going to give it a like either, because of the grammar.
That's a valid one. Sorry, but i have to practice more.
Thank you for your sincerity.
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Np. I'm not one of those douche bags who go on a story, see grammatical errors and then go like 'Omg this story sucks *clicks dislike*' I'm not like that. I only dislike a story if the grammar is bad and i mean really bad (as in 'only just passed moderation by the skin of it's teeth' bad).
I have to agree with Flame here, I don't usually downvote stories just because of grammar, and I'm not going to here either, but this could use some imrpovement. I know there are a bunch of people on this site who would pre-read this for you, heck I think there's an entire group dedicated to pre-reading stories and checking for errors.
If I see this around I'll keep an eye on it.
Crap it! ONE chapter and it already has more fans than my other one? Why is everypony so excited with this one? I'm trying to put more efforts on the song of love! I'm not saying that i'm not going to keep this one. However, I do say that i'll keep on this one when the Song of Love is finished. I'm sorry, but these are the facts.
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NOT ANOTHER ONE!!!
this is the answer!
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or even 
Don't mind at me but... that was just like...
Don't get me wrong. I laughed at it, but... seriously...
Oh great, another 'Evil humans in Equestria... I hope I'm wrong about this one. I'll keep an eye on this.
What's with all the Italicized misspellings?
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For some strange reason that I cannot understand yet, French people can't pronounce the "r" like us ("ar", in the case of english-speaking people. For I am Mexican, we pronounce in spanish "erre"). French people say something like "ergh".
He had to pretend to be something like that.
Got it?
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TF2 Spy references anyone?
3455304 I'm afraid I don't understand what do you mean. Could you explain, please?
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Are you planning on planning making references to TF2's Spy ?
3459494 Oh, Team Fortress 2. (Haven't played it.) It was just an idea that rushed to my mind. After all, i'm just studying this somewhat complex language.
As I said down there, it's difficult to speak French when you've been raised in a culture whose language doesn't have all those types.
well two things. 1. your story has a good idea behind it and I would like to see it develop further. 2. please read over the chapters before posting, the miswording of lines like "she knew it didn't was equestrian" bugs me. I understand what you're trying to say, but I'm just OCD when it comes to grammatical errors, sorry
3478608 No, it's alright dude.
I'll admit it. I'm mexican. English is not my language of born. However, i'm still improving in my writing. Sorry if there are many grammatical errors.
Thanks for your comments. I really appreciate them.
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There are no serious worries, I understand what you mean in some sentences and thats the important thing, being understood, so just keep up the good work
Hope that he is going to kick all of their asses. Luna probably needs to be striked down first in order for him to become enraged.
Not bad. But you jump from Luna to the main Oc a few times which at times is confusing also some of the words are used incorrectly
"why did you saved me" was one of the hiccups I came across also the sentence it is part off to is too wordy try and shorten it as well as remove (...) a comma is used for a breath in conversation ... is used for a dramatic or a long pause like the person has stopped to think.
Good work though and I hope to see a chapter 6 soon
Celestia could've gained a friend, possibly an honorary brother; instead, she lost her sister and gained an enemy
god Celestia is an SOB
oh and MOAR
You are mixing up death with dead. I should be dead at this point is what is used not I should be death by now. Death is usuely used towards someone or used as a threat
I am death
Death awaits you
you will be the death of me
I am so dead
you are dead
I should be dead by now
The two words are used very differently. This fic can be tedious at times to read but i like where you are going I would heavily suggest a beta and proof reader the first to point out where you are going wrong and maybe help you improve and the second to correct parts that are challenging for you.
Some how, I think there will be more humans.
Not sure if the 2 sisters will end this in a peaceful way or a bloody way.
3455304 *snorts* "what did they expect?"
he he he nice one whit the truth potion, well done chapter
Why you turn him into a pony?
Dont pick a fight with a human
well i must admit, this chapter might leave me in a laughing fit
One commet a lot of words in wrong placement but love it
Yes please i want to see more