Anything where DT gets what she deserves interests me. I'll see where this goes. It's well written with the dual perspectives but there are a few grammatical errors here and there. Still, looking forward to the next installment.

This is an awesome idea, it is also very easy to read, I love it.
Can't wait for the next!

3252564 damn it! grammar is always a problem for me...where exactly r the errors that u saw and what should i have done instead? knowing that will let me make corrections...

Omg! You actually got the accent mostly correct :D ! Almost everyone fails at the southern accent. Only problem is the ya'll. she's only addressing one person. Use 'ya' instead. Im gonna like this and watch this as you got it mostly correct except for that one small thing I already mentioned.

3252566 oh i have plans my little pony...

3253430 i do a bit of role playing in text format, and sometimes give the characters accents or manners of speaking that r unique to them so i have a bit of experience. still, a southern drawl is not the easiest accent to do, give me a Scotts accent any day..

3253466 you did good. I personally think it's the easiest. Then agian, I have the same accent :P
Can't wait to read the next. Make diamond suffer in delight.

3253491 as i told another...ive got plans my little pony...oh yes, ive got plans for our dear Diamond Tiara...

Whatever it is that Apple Bloom has in store for Diamond Tiara, I've my fingers crossed that what goes around, comes around.

3253557 oh, i have plans...but nopony will be...permanently damaged...i dont think...it will depend a lot on if Pinkie decides she needs to interfere...that mare is just plain loopy...

3252568 Sugar Cube Corners
Should be Corner.
pushed herself op into a sitting position
That op should be up.
over the contents, these would be coming into
These two thoughts should be separated either by a semicolon or , but to indicate they are a compound sentence.
Diamond tried to escaper her
Should be escape.
Just a couple things here and there, nothing major. Hope it helps

3255823 a great many thanks! now i can go through this and edit it...

3256673 No problem. Can't wait for chapter 2

3258522 that might take a little bit of time...

3258942 Perfectly understandable. There certainly is no deadline for you to meet, and waiting on it isn't going to be too awfully difficult for the rest of us

Ah, torture. It's been a while since I've read a fic like this.