• Published 24th Sep 2013
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The Punishment of Diamond Tiara - Night_Moon60606



Diamond Tiara has always been a trouble maker, but now she's in more trouble than even she expected

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Why did sweetie have to be raped?!

Why not scootaloo or twist, but sweetie?!

Anyway good story

Bueno!

4657138 she kept outscoring Diamond on test after test, and since Diamond doesnt believe in doing her own studying, well...she made a few assumptions that made sense to her and then made a plan to force Sweetie to throw a few tests to lower the grade average and let her coast through a class with minimal effort

Wow..... I can't believe I'm actually liking this.......:pinkiecrazy:

4657600 well, i am glad that u r, a writer always likes to know that their work is appreciated...

4658213 yeah, originally i was gonna have it be a plot to steal Sweeties colt friend...then this happened...

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Took a hard right didn't it?

4660143 a left actually, then it looped, twirled and did three barrel rolls!

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And a back flip while doing a front flip, you know at the same time.

4660206 with a triple chocolate twist for a finisher...

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And a cherry to top it off and then you build another one, parallel to the ruined childhood desert we made.

So it looks like a sand clock

4660282 alright...now thats just evil...

Sweetie Belle scared me when she got angry at Rarity in the episode this chapter title is a parody of. But this... Sweet God/Celestia/Arceus/otherdietyofyourchoice! This is going to be the most beautiful vengeance in fanfiction history! :pinkiecrazy:

4719348 the chapter title actually is not a parody, its the original line from the original poem in a slightly more modern prose. the Poem is called No Man is an Island. as for Sweetie, i was going to have her pissed at Tiara for taking her colt friend, then this just butted in instead...as to her revenge plan...well...tune in next chapter...for then the question of for whome the bell tolls...shall be answered

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