Just a brony with some inner stories, as well all have. I enjoy the show, comics, and clops. Although I am sure I lost a few people with that last word, I still hope things go ok.
[Clopfic] [Necrophilia/Necromancy] [Mind Control] [Cum Inflation] There's many reasons the crystal ponies feared King Sombra. His journals detail just a few of them.
Sombra returns from death to do battle with the caribou, deciding the fate of who rules over Equestria. Will he fight for what's right or to retain his former glory?
Forced to leave her peaceful hometown and flee for her life alongside a mysterious orphan filly named Primrose, New Equestrian war-veteran Scarlet Frost will have to use every resource at her disposal just to stay alive.
Cozy Glow had decided to run away to the far off arctic lands that housed the Crystal Empire. Doing this was a dire mistake that'd last for thousands of years.
3469663 Yeha I get you were trying to show the nighthoofs devotion and all that but "Lord" is masculine. Rarity is a female so it should be the feminine "lady".
Why did you never write another one? You do have the talent, after all.
Monk "Cooties! Of course, colts like him had cooties! Then again, she probably already caught them by now. Oh well, can't get more cooties if you already have them, right? Grabbing the colt’s hoof, she pulled herself up." -IsakeiAnon
I'm not massively into Clopfiction, but I enjoyed that. I'm engaged and I want to see where this goes. Take my like and favorite.
3450908 Thank you very much.
There are probably a few too many commas scattered about than are needed, and a few typos, but it's a pretty solid story aside from that.
Should be Lady Rarity not Lord. And make the chapters longer please.
3451853 I was merely showing the Nighthoof's devotion to her mistress. Also, I will try my best, considering this is my first story.
3469663 Yeha I get you were trying to show the nighthoofs devotion and all that but "Lord" is masculine. Rarity is a female so it should be the feminine "lady".
3469689 Right. ^^; Thanks.
Not a bad story at all,
Why did you never write another one? You do have the talent, after all.
Monk
"Cooties! Of course, colts like him had cooties! Then again, she probably already caught them by now. Oh well, can't get more cooties if you already have them, right? Grabbing the colt’s hoof, she pulled herself up." -IsakeiAnon
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Thank you for the compliments. ^^ Truth be told I let my anxiety get to me.