When Pinkie goes to Canterlot for a Baker's convention she expects to have lots and lots of fun, what she doesn't know it that she'll find something even sweeter then sugar. Love. But unfortunately, Pinkie doesn't understand this, what is love, why do ponies fall in love? Hopefully her friends can enlighten her on what this beautiful and strange thing is.
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Well this is a surprise, as soon as I saw the spelling mistakes in the description I started looking forward to tearing this thing to shreds... instead it turned out to be surprisingly... brilliant!
The descriptions are vivid, the characters all act like their show counterparts, especially Pinkie and that's a hard thing to pull off, and best of all the first chapter isn't unnecessarily rushed.
However, like the description, the actual story is in serious need of a proof-reader, or even spellcheck for a start (an obvious problem that will turn most readers away is Pinkie's name being spelt incorrectly repeatedly), but that's a relatively minor problem and once you take care of that you could easily have a very successful fic in your hands
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Heh, heh, Whoops. Sorry about that, I'll go though and fix those mistakes. Thanks for the comment!
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Thanks, I'm glad to be here!
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*stops laughing to reply*
I was waiting for this!
It's good.
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Thanks!
Dun. Dun. DUUUUUUN!
bravo, good sir -or madam- , bravo. Yes, I have to agree with Reeve; the story seems a little rushed, but that's something easy to prefect over time. Welcome to FIMfiction, btws. I look forward to more!! 
“Consarnit! How come every time you have a one word problem, you can somehow expand it to a paragraph?”
I-it's better not to ask, AJ. She's Pinkie Pie.
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Thanks for the comment! I look forward to pumping out more gradually improving storylines!
(and it is sir Btws *eyebrow bob*)
well done on finishing, quite good indeed
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed!