One day while flying over the Everfree forest Rainbow saw something shiny, naturally she was attracted to it. She then found out what it was, it was a weird lamp. Her ever curiosity had to wait, she had to show Applejack. They find out that it is a genie and he will grant them 3 wishes. Applejack wishes that her family won the lottery so they would never have to worry about money again, while Rainbow wishes for Applejacks accent to be gone. Will Rainbow miss her crush's accent? Can they get it back? Or will Applejack have her new voice forever?
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This will be interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.
A few repeating lines and SOME spelling errors. (I'm a grammar feeder). Other than that, seems great and I can't wait for the second chapter.
a few typos, grammar, and spelling mistakes.
but overall it was pretty good!
GREAT JOB!!!
I agree with SageBromy07.
This. Seems like an interesting plot and I look forward to the next chapter
Hey guys, Next chapter should be out within a few days! If you have any thoughts, or questions, message me! Have a good day!
Nice chapters so far. I can't wait for the next one to be published.
It was okay, but the italic kept going in places it didn't seem to need to be. In my mind, thoughts should be in italic. Sometimes both thoughts and stuff explaining thoughts were in italic and other thoughts weren't and it took time figuring out they were thoughts before I read that they were thoughts.
I still enjoyed this chapter though, so I will give you this