When a rainbow-maned pegasus crashes into her house, Applejack discovers a new friend. Follow along as they learn just how strong friendship (and beyond) can be.
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Whiskers
new to being a brony, but lovin it and im sure i wont stop cuz its SOOOOO AWESOME!
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it was a nice story mind this is the first fanfiction I ever read I liked it
really nice story so far can't wait to read more
Is this friend-shipping or love-shipping?
This sounds incredibly good, will read when have time.
Exellent description, my friend.
Yes...Just yes keep writing more.
thank you all :) i'm spending all of my free time writing (which isnt much time...) so just bear with me and itll be all good
im glad you all like it though.. and its gonna be a love shipping
Decent so far keep up the good work.
a bit too fast on parts but it's still really good. just slow down a bit and put a bit more description, spend a little bit more time on the individual scenes and this would almost look professional
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4sqiqh1-EM thats what i almost did when i read that ^^ and i'll do my best to slow down and put more description in it
Did RD just beat up somepony halfdead for messing up with one of her friends?
It is totally in character as far as i'm concerned (Flim and Flam were lucky AJ was there to hold RD down, or they'd have probably not been in a condition to run away until after an extensive hospital visit), but you don't really see it often in fanfics.
...is it just me or have I read that last part before?...like the last few paragraphs seem exactly like some other story I've read...I dunno, it's still good
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hahaha that was the prologue of my story xD i copy and pasted it into chapter 4 cuz im a lazy pony and barely changed it. hope it worked out well... ^^
457279 makes sense. well done mate, as long as it's not stealing from another story it's perfectly fine
I was hoping for more. That really rustled my jimmies
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there will be more haha just spread out into different fics.
457812 Oh that is good news than. my jimmies are unrustled now.
Loved it Whiskers! Can't wait for more fics!
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I'm writing a bit in my spare time... probably go a bit faster if I had an idea or two (besides a fluttertwi fic) to go off of? could be any subject :) NOT CUPCAKES
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I'm sure you've probably already started on something but I do like the idea of a Fluttertwi fic. Can't really think of anything else, I'm not very imaginative...
Oh, geez, sorry for not replying sooner.
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haha thats okay xD but i can't do a fluttertwi fic cuz i suck at writing either of the characters well :/ a friend of mine is a twilight FAN (in all caps haha) so she could do it easily but is too shy >.< if i can get her to do a lunatwi fic, would you (or anypony else) want a link to it?
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I would....
Also for being short this is good....I enjoyed it....
523186
Sure I would!
EDIT: ...what is this number?...
Good story, and loved every chapter.
My only concern was your was used instead of you're. It's a pet peeve of mine but otherwise it was great! 
So, here's something for your benefit!
Huury write more please
THAT. WAS. SO CUTE!!!!,!!!!! AND.……… you should write more like some stuff that happens in the episodes and stuff like that.
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I havn't written anything since this story... I can give it a slightly decent jab though. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!