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Well... should have read it before saying yes.
OH MY GOD!
Yep, that's a Gamer's instinct right there. Always hit the yes button when it appears without reading.
Whelp! Looks like Moony is going to have to explain some stuff when she returns. I mean even if you hide your power, height, and beauty, you're still walking back with a kid. Still, I am so excited to see what'll come next as our protagonist continues to grow in strength.
lol, well now she has a nice strong mana battery at her beck and call if played right
Awesome, she got a pet/child/slave/assistant/spike, and i wonder how the girls are going to react.
Ah Games have trained her too well :) I Enjoyed this chapter especially the end but one small issue i want to point out is how easiliy her friends are accepting her excuses, without asking any questions, yes they might be a bit naive but they are not stupid and i feel that they should be getting at least a bit suspicious or asking more question. They could even start getting worried about Moon Dancer especially after she brings back a daughter, as now from their point of view she has had a major personallity change, becoming more outgoing but also much more violent, to them She is pulling infomation out of nowhere and going to places that she has no reason to go to. Just because she says she has read about all these threats, doesnt really explain why Moondancer has to go to Tartarus, as if triek had been imprissioned for years by Princess Celestia then they would trust that it would stay that way.
I guess what i am saying is that they are starting to feel a bit like cardboard cutouts that are there to agree with Moondancer, when they should (especially starlight, who is a bit more worldly) be getting worried or angry that Moondancer keeps doing all this dangorous stuff. I can accept that they would agree to keep quite about the Alicorn thing as that is a personal preference and about starlight (though i would of thought at least one would of asked how Moondancer knew about it) but the rest is starting to seem a bit flimsy in explaining it away and i would hate to see this fic suffer due to this when i enjoy the rest so much
Congratulations its a girl.
Well... Fuck
It's just like Equestria to take away an evil act made in good intention and make it into a friendship report. Good luck Jess you're gonna need it.
OH YES!
She's nude. And she just took a child missile to the chest. Do you know what this means? MOTORBOAT! I like to think her new kid knew exactly what she was doing in that situation.
Is the little abomination going to dig holes like gnome?
Teria: mama
Narrator: and in that moment jess knew she f***** up
YAAAYYY!!! BABY TIRREK!!!!
might want to fix that
Ok first of all the power-up gotten from killing Tirek makes sense. The ten levels due to being most likely freakishly high leveled though probably not as much as she would have gained if he wasn't nerfed. Next the power-up gained from absorbing power from the essence of Tirek. Again this makes sense. I mean you had her gain power from the remains of Nightmare Moon's armor for crying out loud which only had wisps of her power on it and not the full since unlike Tirek Nightmare wasn't killed(since that would kill Luna aka best pony aka best princess) but sort of suppressed into a dormant aspect again since she was just Luna's anger and jealousy given a form via magic around Luna's body. With Tirek's essence it makes more sense since it was literally his power compressed into the form of a glowing orb. As for the 'child' gained from not paying attention that was hilarious and I can't wait to see how Jess explains her new growth and the little centauress that calls her mama to her/Moon Dancer's friends. I can not see it going over easily. On the upside with Magic Control she should be able to at least 'TRY' and make a spell to let her shapeshift even if only between her original state and her current form. I mean plans or not Moon Dancer's friends(and Twilight once she realizes that she was a horrible 'not-friend' to her 'friends' in Canterlot.) wont let her only spend time with them since aside from Starlight she only has them and they wanted her to come out of her shell so they wont let her stick to just having them as friends. So she'll have to go out and about at some point. Especially since if only her friends see her but none that know of her usual routine(the librarian for example) don't see her eventually that might draw attention so she'll have to create a way to be in public yet not be found out as a now curvaceous amazon of a alicorn instead of a shorter nerdy unicorn. I mean this is especially true if Moon's parents live in Canterlot. If they don't hear from or see their daughter eventually the Royal Guard will get involved and if only her friends have seen her then they might get in trouble since given how there is a lack of thought via most of the populace and guards(who in their right mind charges a apparently evil Alicorn possibly as strong as the princess that's moved the sun and moon for 1000 years, to them she was a unknown so they should have been more cautions or had a better plan then to rush her if she had been eviler and not just at her core wanting ponies ALIVE to appreciate and love the night she could have easily killed them. Fact of it is you don't recklessly charge a person when you don't know where they stand on either the food chain or their place in the power ranking.) they would assume they kidnapped her leading to jail and trouble with the princess with them possibly spilling the beans and ruining her plans entirely. So developing a means to be in public would be best and if not shapeshifting than a under-powered clone that wouldn't have enough energy to be in her true form but in a base form(original state) to be in public for her.
YOU'RE THE MOTHER!!!
7712338 Yeah, definitely. Although, wouldn't have been much of a plot twist then, would it?
7712355 and talking to nurse joy twice, DAMNIT!@
img00.deviantart.net/4fca/i/2014/164/2/2/lady_tirek_by_theshadowstone-d7maqga.png
http://theshadowstone.deviantart.com/art/Lady-Tirek-460715626
I would like to think Starlight had an idea of what Moony was planing (do to their first meeting and her high INT/WIS) but didn't say anything do to "saving her from herself" and being her first real friend in years,etc.
7713051 geez that's long, write a story while you're at it!
My immediate reaction, the first time I read this, was to shout "Fuck!" at the top of my lungs, much to the displeasure of my mother.
Lets be honest, who here hasn't clicked "Yes" on mistake when trying to rush through some dialogue/tutorial/description information you don't care much about?
Hahaha!! I KNEW!!! I fucking KNEW that would happen as soon as the 'rejuvenate Tirek's essence' popped up!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Ouch My sides