It had been around two months since King Sombra took over the Crystal Empire. Even with the best of efforts, the Elements of Harmony, Princess Cadence, Shining Armor and Spike were unable to stop the King of Dark Magic. Spike and Cadence's whereabouts are unknown and everypony else seems to be just a regular slave.
Save for one, who showed off bravery during the very first meeting between her and her future king. She was granted a position as a soldier in his army, where she was brainwashed to believe all that he believed. However, during the first mission to Hollow Shades, she made multiple mistakes and was pulled from the army and has become a Castle Slave.
A maid if you will.
Rated Teen for Implied Torture and Slavery.
The cover art was made by myself.
Very interesting story you have here.
sweet another interesting chapter, can't wait for the next one.
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Hehe. Thanks.
Looks neat
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Update please!
I smell something shippy
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Toot toot, there it goes, out to sea.
its.. so.. beautiful..
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Thank you for the kind words. I can assure you that there will be new chapters soon and there may be a possibility for some staring contests.
I got really scared because I thought you were going to criticize meYay! I can't wait for the new chapters this is really good! I have noticed a few errors and a good tip that I once got was try rereading what you've written out loud. It helps you catch the little errors. Other that I can't wait for more!
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If you don't mind, could you point out the errors? It usually seems that other people can find my errors better than I can.
I don't really have an editor.. Haha..why do I have a scary feeling that angelarch is gonna get it?
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4915384 is this going to have sombra and fluttershy romance *Wink Wink*
4759236 I know right. I have a feeling that the most awesome villain (besides Discord) King Sombra lied about that he would die if anypony showed even a hint of kindness towards him. Oh and I think he's trying to hide the fact that he's falling in love with fluttershy, . Oooollalla.
5135954 you mean Archangle.
wow this story is old and I need to update the cover page it looks so bad
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Eh, depends on what you see romance as.
i hope you can update soon i really enjoy this series
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Thank you! I plan to update soon, though. Don't worry about that!
I think I have a six pack from laughing that much XD , keep up the good work
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Wh-..
I didn't intend any laughter, but it's good to hear I made you laugh. Thanks!
all this talk of butts and FLUTTERSHY TOUCHING SOMBRA'S BUTT IS BOTH FUNNY AND WEIRD.Good story though.
I’m liking it so far!
OH MY GOSH I CANT STOP LAUGHING!!